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| Subject: Re: By the River Mon 18 Jul 2011 - 17:38 | |
| Metalshard shiffted around in pain, more and more blood poured from her. Soon she would die. "Shinepaw....help me... cobwebs." she mewed in distress. She flailed her paws and gritted her teeth "Dragonsoul...Dragonsoul....no..don't take me.." she wispered. "Bumblepaw, why did you do it..." she was in much pain and her mind was racing. "Sootpelt, I'm sorry, Sootpelt.." she swung her head from side to side. "I never wanted that, none of this.....never." her breath was shallow "Never..give up..never.." she breath stoped and she was still.
occ- shes not dead, she cant die here, I wish she could, but no
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Pinely-san
Characters : Blizzardsky / Sablefur / Palepaw / Larktalon / Patchface / Rowancloud / Sedgeclaw / Owlfang / Pinepaw / Thornpaw / Gorsepaw / Toadpaw / Muddykit / Rookpaw / Daypaw Clan/Rank : [M] RiverClan Apprentice [R] ShadowClan Apprentice [D] ThunderClan Apprentice Number of posts : 5344 Age : 25
| Subject: Re: By the River Mon 18 Jul 2011 - 18:01 | |
| Pinestar stared at her. She paid no attention to the rambling cat that was left unattended on the ground. "Only if you promise never to leave unless it's necessary," she said. ______________________________________ |
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Sun Former Staff
Characters : Turtlefur, Goldenstar, Lynxpetal, Creekpaw, Lightningpaw Clan/Rank : RiverClan Warrior, WindClan Leader, SkyClan Queen RiverClan Apprentice, WindClan Apprentice Number of posts : 8190 Gender : it Age : 25
| Subject: Re: By the River Mon 18 Jul 2011 - 18:04 | |
| "I will never leave RiverClan's side." She promised.
______________________________________ Sun // Living Characters // Deceased Characters
Turtlefur || Tom || RiverClan T5 Warrior || Requirements || #cc9900 Goldenstar || She-cat || WindClan T5 Leader || Requirements || burlywood Lynxpetal || She-cat || SkyClan Queen || darkblue Lightningpaw || Tom || WindClan Apprentice || #dfd47e Creekpaw || She-cat || RiverClan Apprentice || #4c5682
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Pinely-san
Characters : Blizzardsky / Sablefur / Palepaw / Larktalon / Patchface / Rowancloud / Sedgeclaw / Owlfang / Pinepaw / Thornpaw / Gorsepaw / Toadpaw / Muddykit / Rookpaw / Daypaw Clan/Rank : [M] RiverClan Apprentice [R] ShadowClan Apprentice [D] ThunderClan Apprentice Number of posts : 5344 Age : 25
| Subject: Re: By the River Mon 18 Jul 2011 - 18:09 | |
| Pinestar dipped her head. "Alright. We will gladly take you in."
ooc: er.. who was your mentor..? XD ______________________________________ |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: By the River Mon 18 Jul 2011 - 18:12 | |
| occ- come on guys >:U pay attention to her. this is parts of her conversation with Drags
ic- Suddently she yowled in pain, the birds all around her scattered. Only a few words were fully autoable "Dragonsoul....I..can't!" She let out a ear splitting screech before driffting into a heavy pant. |
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Pinely-san
Characters : Blizzardsky / Sablefur / Palepaw / Larktalon / Patchface / Rowancloud / Sedgeclaw / Owlfang / Pinepaw / Thornpaw / Gorsepaw / Toadpaw / Muddykit / Rookpaw / Daypaw Clan/Rank : [M] RiverClan Apprentice [R] ShadowClan Apprentice [D] ThunderClan Apprentice Number of posts : 5344 Age : 25
| Subject: Re: By the River Mon 18 Jul 2011 - 18:18 | |
| Pinestar gave a hiss. "Deadfrost! Get her out of here! She's making it hard to think and she's blurting out nonsense!" ______________________________________ |
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Sun Former Staff
Characters : Turtlefur, Goldenstar, Lynxpetal, Creekpaw, Lightningpaw Clan/Rank : RiverClan Warrior, WindClan Leader, SkyClan Queen RiverClan Apprentice, WindClan Apprentice Number of posts : 8190 Gender : it Age : 25
| Subject: Re: By the River Mon 18 Jul 2011 - 18:41 | |
| OOC: Sleepyyawn XD
IC: Her attention flicked to the dying she-cat. She felt like ignoring her. If Metalshard died, her life would be much easier and would prove that non Clanborn cats could not survive. But every instinct inside her begged to help her. It went against everything she knew toi just stand by and listen as this cat died. She deserves this. It was her own fault for fighting a battle she could not win. Her mind raced. No cat deserves a slow, painful death like this... But it's her own fault! But I can't just let her die.... A soft, silk-like voice echoed in her head. You must save her, Silverpaw. You know it. Sunset's words buzzed her. She felt compassion surge through her. "Pinestar." She said, her voice suprisingly calm. "We must help her. No cat deserves a slow, painful death, no matter how wretched thay are." ______________________________________ Sun // Living Characters // Deceased Characters
Turtlefur || Tom || RiverClan T5 Warrior || Requirements || #cc9900 Goldenstar || She-cat || WindClan T5 Leader || Requirements || burlywood Lynxpetal || She-cat || SkyClan Queen || darkblue Lightningpaw || Tom || WindClan Apprentice || #dfd47e Creekpaw || She-cat || RiverClan Apprentice || #4c5682
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Pinely-san
Characters : Blizzardsky / Sablefur / Palepaw / Larktalon / Patchface / Rowancloud / Sedgeclaw / Owlfang / Pinepaw / Thornpaw / Gorsepaw / Toadpaw / Muddykit / Rookpaw / Daypaw Clan/Rank : [M] RiverClan Apprentice [R] ShadowClan Apprentice [D] ThunderClan Apprentice Number of posts : 5344 Age : 25
| Subject: Re: By the River Mon 18 Jul 2011 - 18:48 | |
| Pinestar looked at her. "What are we supposed to do about it? There aren't any medicine cats around." ______________________________________ |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: By the River Mon 18 Jul 2011 - 18:49 | |
| Tears begin to drip from Metalshards closed eyes as rapidly as the blood. "I'm sorry!" she yowled. "So sorry.....Riverclan...sorry...please...forgive me." she panted and began to slow down her words grew into soft whispers. Dragonsoul appeared in front of Pinestar "That cat is asking your forgiveness, Pinestar, she will be close do death soon, but I have seen her truth heart, you can not let her die, you must help her." she mewed in a warm voice. "I know Riverclan wouldn't let a cat suffer like that, Bluestar wouldn't." she added. |
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Pinely-san
Characters : Blizzardsky / Sablefur / Palepaw / Larktalon / Patchface / Rowancloud / Sedgeclaw / Owlfang / Pinepaw / Thornpaw / Gorsepaw / Toadpaw / Muddykit / Rookpaw / Daypaw Clan/Rank : [M] RiverClan Apprentice [R] ShadowClan Apprentice [D] ThunderClan Apprentice Number of posts : 5344 Age : 25
| Subject: Re: By the River Mon 18 Jul 2011 - 18:51 | |
| Pinestar shouldered past the StarClan cat hesitantly. She dippped down to pick up the cat. "C'mon. We don't have all day," she persisted. They had to get her to a medicine cat. ______________________________________ |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: By the River Mon 18 Jul 2011 - 18:53 | |
| The wind blew by and Dragonsoul was gone. She trusted that Metalshard was in good paws now. Meanwhile Metalshard grew more and more limp as the Riverclan cats dragged her away. She mumbled things every now and them. "Don't let me die, help, Shinepaw, cobwebs." |
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Sun Former Staff
Characters : Turtlefur, Goldenstar, Lynxpetal, Creekpaw, Lightningpaw Clan/Rank : RiverClan Warrior, WindClan Leader, SkyClan Queen RiverClan Apprentice, WindClan Apprentice Number of posts : 8190 Gender : it Age : 25
| Subject: Re: By the River Mon 18 Jul 2011 - 18:59 | |
| Cobwebs. "I'll be right back, Pinestar. I know what will help." Marygold and cobwebs, Silverpaw Sunset's voice said. Where did she find marygold? Slipping away, she found a small hole closed up by thick cobwebs. Wrapping them around her paw, she scented the air. Marygold, on the other side of the river. But she was RiverClan. She couldn't cross! Cobwebs will do. She sped back quickly, tracking them by scent. "These should help." She said. ______________________________________ Sun // Living Characters // Deceased Characters
Turtlefur || Tom || RiverClan T5 Warrior || Requirements || #cc9900 Goldenstar || She-cat || WindClan T5 Leader || Requirements || burlywood Lynxpetal || She-cat || SkyClan Queen || darkblue Lightningpaw || Tom || WindClan Apprentice || #dfd47e Creekpaw || She-cat || RiverClan Apprentice || #4c5682
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: By the River Mon 18 Jul 2011 - 20:05 | |
| "Poppy seeds make the pain go away, Shinepaw!" she laughed as if she was enjoying a wonderfull memorie. It seemed as though she was watching the moments of her life. |
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Ebby
Characters : Stormsong, Doekit Clan/Rank : ShadowClan Arborist; Mindflayer Enthusiast Number of posts : 6705 Gender : She / Her Age : 29
| Subject: Re: By the River Mon 18 Jul 2011 - 20:06 | |
| ooc::
Ebonyroot sprang out of the undergrowth. "I've got deathberries~!" she sang. ______________________________________ |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: By the River Mon 18 Jul 2011 - 20:11 | |
| occ- wtf Ebs xD we don't need Deathberrys, you silly meddy c:
ic- "Deathberrys...kill...don't touch...kill..." She murrmered when she heard the word. |
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