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| Subject: Leapordkits creation :D Sun Jun 19, 2011 5:11 pm | |
| cat name:Leapordkit,leapordpaw,leapordfur
tom or shecat:Shecat
faivorite warriors charecters:Spottedleaf,Leapordstar,Sandstorm
familiarity with the series:I have read a few of the books
appearance:orange fur with black spots,and black tips of ears ,and black paws.
personality:playful,stubborn,brave,mischiveous.
origins:Rc
Rp sample:Leapordkit was playing in the nursery,with all the other kits,and stumbled over another kit,Leapordkit bawled"ow!That hurt alot!"Leapordkit crawled back to her mother, and meowed" Mom! I got hurt!" mother replied"are you okay?"Leapordkit meow"yes, I'll be ok...I think." Leapordkit ran back to the other kits and as if nothing happened began playing again.
secret word:bluebird |
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Pinely-san
Characters : Blizzardsky / Sablefur / Palepaw / Larktalon / Patchface / Rowancloud / Sedgeclaw / Owlfang / Pinepaw / Thornpaw / Gorsepaw / Toadpaw / Muddykit / Rookpaw / Daypaw Clan/Rank : [M] RiverClan Apprentice [R] ShadowClan Apprentice [D] ThunderClan Apprentice Number of posts : 5344 Age : 25
| Subject: Re: Leapordkits creation :D Sun Jun 19, 2011 6:30 pm | |
| OOO you rp pretty good! :D
(although, there are some mistakes.)
Leapordkit was playing in the nursery,with all the other kits,and stumbled over another kit,Leapordkit bawled"ow!That hurt alot!"Leapordkit crawled back to her mother, and meowed" Mom! I got hurt!" mother replied"are you okay?"Leapordkit meow"yes, I'll be ok...I think." Leapordkit ran back to the other kits and as if nothing happened began playing again.
Leopardkit was playing in the Nursery with all the other kits and stumbled over another kit. Leopardkit bawled, "Ow! That hurt a lot!" Leopardkit crawled back to her mother and meowed, "Mom! I got hurt!" Mother replied, "Are you okay?" Leopardkit meowed, "Yes, i'll be ok... I think." Leopardkit ran back to the other kits, and as if nothing happened, began playing again.
also, leapord is supposed to be spelled leopard.
approve eet, rayne! ______________________________________
Last edited by Sekalfenip on Sun Jun 19, 2011 6:35 pm; edited 2 times in total |
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Rainy
Characters : Heatherpaw Number of posts : 5137 Age : 27
| Subject: Re: Leapordkits creation :D Sun Jun 19, 2011 6:31 pm | |
| You might want to use your punctuation a little bit better, but otherwise, you're good to go! Well, and you're not spelling your name right. It's Leopard (:
APPROVED!
I'd also like to thank other members in advance *coughpizzacough* to wait to see what an admin thinks :3 Before taking everything out of their mouth |
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