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+11Wolf not fish Bloo Leo Ebby Goldfish Mossy Icee Sleepy Bitterkit Rainy 15 posters |
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Bitterkit
Clan/Rank : Kit of SHADOWCLAN!!!!!! x3
 
Number of posts : 36
Age : 28
| | Subject: Re: 24 Hours Review Sun 5 Jun 2011 - 18:03 | |
| Okay dokay ______________________________________  <-------CLICK IT!!!!you know you want to >=) |
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Leo
Characters : Leopardheart
Clan/Rank : Thunderclan/Former Deputy
 
Number of posts : 6901
Age : 26
| | Subject: Re: 24 Hours Review Wed 8 Jun 2011 - 7:09 | |
| Update eet! <3
I lubed eet :D
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ur fave is problematic and i'm exo trash
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Rainy
Characters : Heatherpaw
Number of posts : 5137
Age : 27
| | Subject: Re: 24 Hours Review Wed 8 Jun 2011 - 7:16 | |
| I'll get there eventually, within the next week, Leo. I've got a little bit of writer's block :/
P.S. Mavericks <3 (: |
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Leo
Characters : Leopardheart
Clan/Rank : Thunderclan/Former Deputy
Number of posts : 6901
Age : 26
| | Subject: Re: 24 Hours Review Wed 8 Jun 2011 - 7:33 | |
| *falls into violent spasms of happiness at Mavericks beating Heat*
You voted in my topic, right?
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ur fave is problematic and i'm exo trash
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Sleepy
Clan/Rank : RiverClan
Number of posts : 9741
Age : 25
| | Subject: Re: 24 Hours Review Wed 8 Jun 2011 - 7:36 | |
| Writers block? DDDDD:
I'd help, but I know what it's like when people tell you what to do in your story. ______________________________________ ‹‹ former site administrator ››
pm me |
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Bloo
Clan/Rank : N/A
Number of posts : 4295
Age : 25
| | Subject: Re: 24 Hours Review Wed 8 Jun 2011 - 8:22 | |
| Fantastic! Moon's attitude in awesome xD Keep it up! ;D |
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Rainy
Characters : Heatherpaw
Number of posts : 5137
Age : 27
| | Subject: Re: 24 Hours Review Wed 8 Jun 2011 - 17:28 | |
| @Leo: I'll have to go find it now >:U
@Sleepy: Yeah. . I will sometimes ask people for help, but I'm trying to use the skills I've been taught to 'spice up my writing', which makes it slightly more difficult. Thanks, though
@Bloo: Oh, I know Moon .3. Not in RL, but enough to the point where I can get his mannerism down |
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not fish
Clan/Rank : Professional zombie.
Number of posts : 6614
Gender : what is gender
Age : 26
| | Subject: Re: 24 Hours Review Wed 8 Jun 2011 - 18:00 | |
| *clapclap* Roadkill approves. :p ______________________________________ i was fish the whole time, surprise
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Wolf
Characters : Beetlekit [B] Snowkit [S]
Clan/Rank : [B] Kit [S]
Number of posts : 563
Age : 26
| | Subject: Re: 24 Hours Review Wed 8 Jun 2011 - 19:42 | |
| You did a great job Rain! i cant wait to see how it turns out!
______________________________________ Current Lives:Beetlekit
Age: Six Moons
Rank: Kit
Clan: Skyclan- Spoiler:
Snowkit
Age: Newborn
Rank: Kit
Clan: Thunderclan- Spoiler:
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Tigs
Number of posts : 5142
| | Subject: Re: 24 Hours Review Thu 9 Jun 2011 - 5:53 | |
| Hey rayne? You know, we have a whole horde of writers, right here at ur disposal? If you need ideas, just ask. :3
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regret
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Rainy
Characters : Heatherpaw
Number of posts : 5137
Age : 27
| | Subject: Re: 24 Hours Review Thu 9 Jun 2011 - 15:46 | |
| Umm, yeah, but I just explained the problem up there ^ |
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Morning
Clan/Rank : Thunderclan/Apprentice
 
Number of posts : 395
Age : 25
| | Subject: Re: 24 Hours Review Thu 9 Jun 2011 - 16:10 | |
| I loved it!!!!!!! :laa: Now I want more!It was so epically awesome. |
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Wolf
Characters : Beetlekit [B] Snowkit [S]
Clan/Rank : [B] Kit [S]
Number of posts : 563
Age : 26
| | Subject: Re: 24 Hours Review Thu 9 Jun 2011 - 17:02 | |
| I just realized, i forgot to mention in my template that coon and are friends in rl, so don't let us get in an argument, K? ______________________________________ Current Lives:Beetlekit
Age: Six Moons
Rank: Kit
Clan: Skyclan- Spoiler:
Snowkit
Age: Newborn
Rank: Kit
Clan: Thunderclan- Spoiler:
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Feath ❤️
Number of posts : 2815
Age : 27
| | Subject: Re: 24 Hours Review Thu 9 Jun 2011 - 19:36 | |
| RAINNNNNNNNNN (: it was AMAZING (in shorter words) I CANNOT wait till the next addition comes out <3 I love how I got first :3
Btw, can you make my room beside yours? ______________________________________ |
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Sun
Former Staff
Characters : Turtlefur, Goldenstar, Lynxpetal, Creekpaw, Lightningpaw
Clan/Rank : RiverClan Warrior, WindClan Leader, SkyClan Queen RiverClan Apprentice, WindClan Apprentice
Number of posts : 8190
Gender : it
Age : 25
| | Subject: Re: 24 Hours Review Thu 9 Jun 2011 - 19:42 | |
| Awesomely amazing. However, if you could give a little bit more description of the characters, it would be nice. Like, I had a dog companion, if thats allowed, could you please mention that or something? ______________________________________ Sun // Living Characters // Deceased Characters
Turtlefur || Tom || RiverClan T5 Warrior || Requirements || #cc9900
Goldenstar || She-cat || WindClan T5 Leader || Requirements || burlywood
Lynxpetal || She-cat || SkyClan Queen || darkblue
Lightningpaw || Tom || WindClan Apprentice || #dfd47e
Creekpaw || She-cat || RiverClan Apprentice || #4c5682
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