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Pinely-san
Characters : Blizzardsky / Sablefur / Palepaw / Larktalon / Patchface / Rowancloud / Sedgeclaw / Owlfang / Pinepaw / Thornpaw / Gorsepaw / Toadpaw / Muddykit / Rookpaw / Daypaw Clan/Rank : [M] RiverClan Apprentice [R] ShadowClan Apprentice [D] ThunderClan Apprentice Number of posts : 5344 Age : 25
| Subject: The Dark Side Thu 2 Dec 2010 - 19:20 | |
| ooc: i did this because: 1. i wanted to see pineh's dark side.. and 2. because i really wanted to make a topic in dream territory XD
ic: The cold bitterness hung down on the forest gloomly. The trees arched over and their branches were giant claws. There was no moonlight. Only darkness. Nothing stirred here. The trees were bare. The creatures of the night were not out. Not even the owls dared to come out. Yet, you could see a faint trail of scarlet blood. Nothing shone off of it. If you followed that trail, you could see her. Her eyes were a dark red. She said nothing. All she did was twitch her whiskers. This creature.. yes, indeed, it was a cat. Her pelt blended with the surrounding darkness. Pitch black. But, barely, you could just make out a faint tint of brown. Her ears. Her paws were brown, yes, but you could not tell. Her brown paws, they were not brown, but red. They were covered with blood. She was holding her paw down on a figure lying on the cold earth. Her unsheathed claws were deep in the fur. Another cat. The eyes were open wide in horror. The mouth was twisted in the oddest way. Light streams of tears were running down its face. The she-cat, the one who was standing over the dead one, still said nothing. Slowly, she bent down, and stared eye to eye with the other. Slowly and calmly, her mouth spread in a grin, and barely, just so she could hear, she whispered in a voice that had a tone of calmness and bitterness, "I am Spiritpine.."
ooc: very detailed. i can do better ^3^ ______________________________________
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Feath ❤️
Number of posts : 2815 Age : 27
| Subject: Re: The Dark Side Thu 2 Dec 2010 - 19:41 | |
| (imma post)
Featherpaw ran through the dream, a dog chasing her, barking. Its vicious, drooling, teeth formed a horrendous smile, and every time it barked, Sunpaw's name would come out. She couldn't bare the thoughts. Then she would look back at the dog, and the scene would have changed. Sunpaw running after her, clearing twisted and crazy. Or her mother, with bloody red paws. She ran and ran, but couldn't get away. And finally she turned back once, and they were gone. The images of love rejected or something stolen from her life. And finally Featherpaw layed on the ground and cried. But her fit didn't last long. A figure produced from the lifeless, leaveless, bushes. The cat was no big, or smaller than she. Her pelt was gray, with familiar stripes, dark gray than the solid pelt. Her tail was bushy, and twitched. A faint smile curled her lips, and pointy fangs gleamed. Her paws were stained, with blood. She looked exactly like Featherpaw. But the eyes, they were different. A dark crimson red. Eyes that turned the whole cat around. Made her to be a monster, a killer, eyes you identify as nightmares. But she didn't bother Featherpaw. This was the cat she had been waiting for, the one to show her the light. And so she welcomed this other cat like and equal, as though she was a long lost friend. "Wise of you." The other she-cat said, her smile growing wider and grimer. "What is your name." The real feather asked. "Pawfeather. I am your opposite. And your equal. Without me there is no you, and without you there is no me, but now you have realized that we must come together. Let's walk." Pawfeather said. Featherpaw followed her, not knowing what to expect. ______________________________________ |
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Pinely-san
Characters : Blizzardsky / Sablefur / Palepaw / Larktalon / Patchface / Rowancloud / Sedgeclaw / Owlfang / Pinepaw / Thornpaw / Gorsepaw / Toadpaw / Muddykit / Rookpaw / Daypaw Clan/Rank : [M] RiverClan Apprentice [R] ShadowClan Apprentice [D] ThunderClan Apprentice Number of posts : 5344 Age : 25
| Subject: Re: The Dark Side Thu 2 Dec 2010 - 19:54 | |
| ooc: lol im going to edit my old post and make it Spiritpine
The she-cat slowly got up. Her eyes started to wander aimlessly. She heard pawsteps nearby. She put a paw forward, around the cat below her. She stepped a bit farther and peered around. She started to approach two cats. They were exactly alike. Her eyes softened to a dark magenta. She stopped a bit away from the two. She stood there, a soft breeze slowly lapping at her red paws. Her face showed no expression. Before they spotted her, she whipped into hiding.
Her eyes blinked. She gasped in a breathful of air. She could feel her pulse again. She could hear the breeze. Feel the ruffle of her matted fur. She spat out a mouthful of blood. She barely made it. I'm alive! She could get up. She felt pain. Adding to that, the voices in her head made her feel alone. You are all alone, Pinespirit. You will always be alone. You have nearly been killed by yourself, so just give up. You belong nowhere, and we do not accept you here. Pinespirit had to get out of this horrible wilderness. ______________________________________
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Feath ❤️
Number of posts : 2815 Age : 27
| Subject: Re: The Dark Side Thu 2 Dec 2010 - 20:01 | |
| " Where are we going Pawfeather?" Featherpaw asked. The she-cat had taken them through the woods, something she recognized. They were in a twisted version on ThunderClan. The trees looked as though they would reach down and grab you up. But none did. The passed the sandy hollow, the sand was black and littered with weird objects Featherpaw had never seen before. " What's that?" Featherpaw asked. " The Volcano Hollow. Very hot red liquid comes out and eats the things in the hollow, so we put two-leg things there." She said, not anwser Featherpaw's first question. The went passed some grassy area, and end up at Fourtrees, but instead of four rocks, there was one shiny piece of water, frozen in place. "Where are we?" She asked. Then she saw a motionless body laid on the weird rock. "This is Onetrees. And that it Peltred. You don't know why your hear do you?" She asked, starting to circle Featherpaw, who was shaking her head no. ______________________________________ |
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Leo
Characters : Leopardheart Clan/Rank : Thunderclan/Former Deputy Number of posts : 6901 Age : 26
| Subject: Re: The Dark Side Fri 3 Dec 2010 - 16:21 | |
| Leopardheart popped out. There was another she cat behind her. "I am Heartleopard. I am your equal." The cat smirked. "Oh look, it's Pawfeather." ______________________________________ ur fave is problematic and i'm exo trash
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not fish
Clan/Rank : Professional zombie. Number of posts : 6614 Gender : what is gender Age : 26
| Subject: Re: The Dark Side Fri 3 Dec 2010 - 16:22 | |
| OCC: Can I join this? ______________________________________ i was fish the whole time, surprise
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Leo
Characters : Leopardheart Clan/Rank : Thunderclan/Former Deputy Number of posts : 6901 Age : 26
| Subject: Re: The Dark Side Fri 3 Dec 2010 - 16:37 | |
| OCC: I think everyone can. ______________________________________ ur fave is problematic and i'm exo trash
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not fish
Clan/Rank : Professional zombie. Number of posts : 6614 Gender : what is gender Age : 26
| Subject: Re: The Dark Side Fri 3 Dec 2010 - 16:46 | |
| Deadpaw was walking in an unfamiliar clearing, when a strange cat crept out of the bushes. He looked like Deadpaw. His voice was a raspy snarl, yet somewhat gentle. "I am Pawdead." ______________________________________ i was fish the whole time, surprise
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Leo
Characters : Leopardheart Clan/Rank : Thunderclan/Former Deputy Number of posts : 6901 Age : 26
| Subject: Re: The Dark Side Sat 4 Dec 2010 - 9:00 | |
| Heartleopard smiled. "Grettings, Pawdead." ______________________________________ ur fave is problematic and i'm exo trash
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not fish
Clan/Rank : Professional zombie. Number of posts : 6614 Gender : what is gender Age : 26
| Subject: Re: The Dark Side Sat 4 Dec 2010 - 11:20 | |
| Pawdead nodded to Heartleopard. "Greetings." ______________________________________ i was fish the whole time, surprise
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Leo
Characters : Leopardheart Clan/Rank : Thunderclan/Former Deputy Number of posts : 6901 Age : 26
| Subject: Re: The Dark Side Sat 4 Dec 2010 - 13:26 | |
| "So, we meet here to discuss the future." ______________________________________ ur fave is problematic and i'm exo trash
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not fish
Clan/Rank : Professional zombie. Number of posts : 6614 Gender : what is gender Age : 26
| Subject: Re: The Dark Side Sat 4 Dec 2010 - 15:59 | |
| Pawdead nodded. "Yes." He looked at Featherpaw and her interloper. "Is that clear?" ______________________________________ i was fish the whole time, surprise
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Feath ❤️
Number of posts : 2815 Age : 27
| Subject: Re: The Dark Side Sat 4 Dec 2010 - 16:43 | |
| Pawfeahter snarled. " Well of course mouse brained! Im the one incharge of this meeting! It is about Featherpaw's future." She said cooing the last part to her companion. "Yes, but why is Redpel- Im mean Peltred here?" She asked confused at all the other cats. She sounded so innocent compaired to them, and looked the part too. " He isn't here my dear. He's gone. This is just his body. Peltred is dead. And I have killed him." She hissed.
OCC: i love how you all follow along with the names. :D ______________________________________ |
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not fish
Clan/Rank : Professional zombie. Number of posts : 6614 Gender : what is gender Age : 26
| Subject: Re: The Dark Side Sat 4 Dec 2010 - 16:46 | |
| Pawdead didn't flinch at Pawfeather's anger. "No need to get riled up." He narrowed his eyes. "Pawfeather, why did you kill him?" he asked. ______________________________________ i was fish the whole time, surprise
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Locust~Lightning
Clan/Rank : Skyclan Deputy~Thunderclan Warrior Number of posts : 1749 Age : 24
| Subject: Re: The Dark Side Sat 4 Dec 2010 - 16:47 | |
| Lightningpaw appeard out of nowhere, " Hello PawLightning, i am your equal, come on, lets meet the others" An cat having the same appearance as Lightningpaw mewed ______________________________________ Emberfrost SkyclanDeputy- Spoiler:
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