3Charms&aCurse Reviews

Subject: 3Charms&aCurse Reviews Fri 5 Nov 2010 - 15:50

Should I continue, and tell me why or why not. Also tell me what could be improved. Even though I haven't done the first chatper yet.. Still, for you authors, give me some advice! Thanks!

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Subject: Re: 3Charms&aCurse Reviews Fri 5 Nov 2010 - 18:23

YESSSSSSSSS CONTINUES IT

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Bramblestar, ShadowClan Leader
Shadowpaw, WindClan... apprentice.

Stolded from Moon and Ebz >:)
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16. DON'T BE OFFENDED BY THE CHATBOX.

Clan/Rank : N/A Number of posts : 4295 Age : 25

It's so great! Have you ever read Pendragon? It reminds me of that! You should PUBLISH EEEEEETTTT!!!!!!

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Redfern

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Subject: Re: 3Charms&aCurse Reviews Fri 5 Nov 2010 - 18:37

No, I haven't read Pendragon. But I should. Ivy has those books, (I think I saw her reading it one day) maybe I should read them! And thanks! :D

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Characters : Heatherpaw Number of posts : 5137 Age : 27

Moon, that was great! I love the detail, but perhaps you should leave just a little to the reader's imagination. Otherwise, brilliant. =)

Subject: Re: 3Charms&aCurse Reviews Fri 5 Nov 2010 - 19:39

The reader's imagination... They can totally expand on the detail. It's easier to do that when not writing in first person, though. It's told from the narrator's view... how he sees it. Thank you..even if you're all lying to mkae me feel better....!!!

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Characters : Heatherpaw Number of posts : 5137 Age : 27

You're welcome. XD Just trying to help, make it better.

Subject: Re: 3Charms&aCurse Reviews Fri 5 Nov 2010 - 19:41

Oh! Believe me, I know you are!! It could use LOTS of improvement, thank you for helping!

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Characters : Heatherpaw Number of posts : 5137 Age : 27

It doesn't need a lot, it's really quite good, I'm just helping make it even better.

Clan/Rank : N/A Number of posts : 4295 Age : 25

I agree Rain. Just leave a little bit out for the reader to imagine... You know how is warriors the description for some of the cats is: 'Lean pale tabby tom' or something. Just leave out some detail! :D

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Redfern

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Number of posts : 2136 Age : 23

ItS GREAT KEEP GOIN!

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PM ME TO KEEL YOUR CAT

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Have gained the rank of warrior.yup
Have mentored at least one apprentice.nope
Are responsible and active.yup
Are a good role-player.yup
Have been a warrior for at least three months. (In that clan) yup
Have signed-up for the position and gotten it approved nope

Subject: Re: 3Charms&aCurse Reviews Sat 6 Nov 2010 - 18:04

I've never heard less detail.. Only more detail. XD

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Subject: Re: 3Charms&aCurse Reviews Mon 8 Nov 2010 - 16:30

The even-worse chapter 2 is posted...

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Subject: Re: 3Charms&aCurse Reviews Mon 8 Nov 2010 - 16:35

Moonpie why you always hatin' on your stories!?!? :speechless:

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Bramblestar, ShadowClan Leader
Shadowpaw, WindClan... apprentice.

Stolded from Moon and Ebz >:)
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Spoiler:

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16. DON'T BE OFFENDED BY THE CHATBOX.

Characters : Heatherpaw Number of posts : 5137 Age : 27

MOONEH, THAT WAS BRILLIANTICUS! :DD I loooooved iiiiiit!

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