Sun & Soot

Username: Brick
Clans involved: RiverClan
Characters Directly Involved (include the rpers): Jaystar, Sunkit, Sootkit. (Fox & Fire patrol)
Will there be a Murder/Several Murders?: No
Please Provide an Explanation of your Plot: (This takes please during the blazing hot summer) Sunkit is going to go exploring, alone. But she doesn't come back. Jaystar is going to receive a prophecy, told by a unknown or Starclan cat. The cat will say ""The sun's givings will hurt the land. However the sun will arise from the soot that stays afloat." A small fire will start, just some dry grass in a sunny area, the river will quickly put out the fire. But some cats will discover it so the fire is known. Soot sudently goes missing too. He exventually gets washed up in the river. The soot from the fire lays apon the river but all the sudden the only soot thats on the river is Sootkit (The soot from the fire gets washed away but Sootkit doesn't). When Sootkit is rescued he keeps talking about a certain den. He can describe every inch of the den like hes looking right at it. A patrol goes out to look for a den and they find it. But theres a fox living inside of it. And behind the fox is poor, terrifided Sunkit. So then the patrol fights, and drives away the fox. But if you want to make this interesting, the patrol doesn't have to drive it away and then the clan can face more challanges.
Please Provide a Link to your Plotting Page: Huh? Whats this?
Why should this plot be approved?: Becuase I think it would be a fun suspeceful plot, and a great way to kill off some of Jays lives.

Extra:
Jay boi can loose some lives from drowning trying to save Soot, he can burn up, or loose 1 in the fox fight.
We also need 2 patrols. 1 patrol that finds the fire, and anoter patrol to fight off the fox and get Sunkit back.

You're supposed to PM this to a mod.

I did

So, like Stag said, this is the form you PM to a mod. The 'plotting page' would be exactly what you created right here: a page for your plot explaining the details to other people who might be interested. For most people, it is different than the form sent to the mods, but to each their own way of doing it.

If this gets approved, I would be more than happy to have my character Sparkpaw be a part of the patrol!

Okay! Sparkpaw can be on the fire or fox patrol. I send Jay bord the link tho. But now i know i did it wrong lmao