Let The Man Rest

I have decided to finally put Spotfur to rest.

He's been through a lot and several skype people agree that Spotfur should be put to rest. But I have some criteria.

-He needs to go out dramatically, like brought to camp to die soon after. Like before the MCs can help. Many must witness
-He needs something that'll leave him a legacy- saving someone or something. Something that'll get him respected.
-He will die in camp after saying weak last words to his loved ones, so something that will mortally wound him.

help me with ideas!!!

i got something
so spotfur goes on patrol with a few others
they're all hunting so spotfur is away from the rest except for one apprentice near him
so theres 2 foxes or something
they'd attack the apprentice but Spotfur protect the now wounded but not mortally wounded apprentice
Spotfur would get mortally wounded
Patrol would fight off the rest of the foxes
spotfur would've protected the apprentice = legacy
Spotfur is brought back to camp
While the apprentice will be saved, Spotfur cannot and then dies shortly after returning
the end
(im kinda just throwing out my random thoughts thats why this isn't worded super well)

Heck. I was hoping he could witness Silverfang's death. Oh well, whatever you do, I would love to be there :3

me too but it's time for him to rest

nO
nOT sPOT
Feather is already devastated
This is sad
i'M gOnNa cRy iN a CoRnEr

I like Wolven's idea!
He could save an apprentice, then be brought to camp to say his dying words.

I'm sad now ;;

if this were to happen soon, Fallow would be the one who has to attempt to help him, so her not being able to save him is gonna be a major road bump for her and her confidence ;)

Depending on when it happens I can have Xuexi come into the picture wounding him ....if you want like she could try to attack an apprentice and he gets in her way?

ok update ima try and get Spot deaf in an ear and kinda hard of hearing in the other, do we have any volunteers?

that'll be enough to let him b an Elder

Question, would this happen sooner or later

Again offering Xuexi lol and yeah when is this taking place?

Is he dying or becoming an elder?

The only thing I can think of is doing something or being attacked by Shade, but that’s too recurring to have any real importance anymore

Let’s see...

Well, maybe a kit or two related to Jaystar or something?? could be in danger of being killed by a predator and Spotfur rushes in to save the day
And like
Hillfire or Coldpaw or someone who disrespects him could be there to witness Spotfur heroically fighting away or even kill a big ol’ pred by himself
So they could no longer see him as some lamed weak cat who belongs in the elders’ den because they’d know the kits would die if not for him
Patrol witnesses gain refound respect for him as they bring him back to camp
Then he dies a hero before his Clan
Proving that no matter what your disabilities or setbacks you can always expect anyone to risk their lives for the good of the Clan

That’s my idea anyway. I’m probably too tired to come up with anything better XD

WolvenMight wrote:

Question, would this happen sooner or later

Littlestream wrote:

Again offering Xuexi lol and yeah when is this taking place?

On the sooner side. As soon as the topic with Hillfire and Spotfur having a quarrel, preferably, so in a few days or less.. Will be replaced by a Shadowclan cat.

Squirrelnose wrote:

Is he dying or becoming an elder?

Elder.

Yoshachu Scorchachu wrote:

The only thing I can think of is doing something or being attacked by Shade, but that’s too recurring to have any real importance anymore

Let’s see...

Well, maybe a kit or two related to Jaystar or something?? could be in danger of being killed by a predator and Spotfur rushes in to save the day
And like
Hillfire or Coldpaw or someone who disrespects him could be there to witness Spotfur heroically fighting away or even kill a big ol’ pred by himself
So they could no longer see him as some lamed weak cat who belongs in the elders’ den because they’d know the kits would die if not for him
Patrol witnesses gain refound respect for him as they bring him back to camp
Then he dies a hero before his Clan
Proving that no matter what your disabilities or setbacks you can always expect anyone to risk their lives for the good of the Clan

That’s my idea anyway. I’m probably too tired to come up with anything better XD

so
forgot to tell ya in pms
he's eldering now
sorry
It honestly wouldn't matter if he saved them or not tho, he took a blow for Coldpaw and they started attacking him verbally like "you belong in the elders den smh" "wHy DiDnT yOu SeE iT eArLiEr"

Elder's can't have kits, so can we squeeze in a quick litter?

Maybe when he's wounded really bad, Nutfur will think he's dying and be like "I'm having you're kits, you can't die!" and then he doesn't die and just is wounded to the point of becoming an elder and can watch his kits grow up from the elder's den.

eeeee yis
yis yis yis