Greytree of Thunderclan

Name: Greytree

Gender: She-cat

Age: 120 moons old

Rank: Elder

Clan: Thunderclan

Family:
Mother: Wolfblaze
Father: Thunderstorm

History:
Greytree was an only kit and was small and weak throughout her kithood. She was born deaf but gained her hearing at 5 moons old, causing everyone to think that she would never be a warrior. She loved to play mossball with other kits. When Greytree was an apprentice, she was eager to learn and hunt. She loved the feel of prey in her claws and misses it deeply. Greytree sometimes sneaks out to hunt at night. As a warrior, Greytree was loyal and bossy at times. She almost lost her tail in a fox trap and it is still a mangled mess of fur and flesh. She had thought about being a medicine cat, but decided not to with the help of Wolfheart. She was barren, and never had a mate.

Personality:
Greytree can get a bit overpowering when cats trespass on Stormclan territory. She can give up when she is frustrated and does it a lot. She is kind to all cats, and will bend the rules to help her clan. Greytree can be very threatening at times, even through her old age.

Skills:
Hunting: 7
Tracking: 5
Running: 6
Fighting: 5
Memory: 9
Stamina: 2
Swimming: 0
Speed: 3

Description:
Grey she-cat with violet eyes and a white chest and muzzle. She has pure white straight whiskers. Her tail is a mangled mess of fur and flesh. One of her ears is ripped through the middle.

Hello, there are several things that need to be fixed in this application before it can be approved.

Firstly, all our cats start as kits unless they are rogues/kittypets. As Greytree is a TC cat, she will have to begin as a kit.

Secondly, I noticed you wrote StormClan? Is that a typo? If not, our RP site follows Book Canon when regarding the formation of the five clans and the areas of the forest, we don't have alternate clans such as FireClan or StormClan.

Thirdly, the skills stats you've written are unnecessary for our forum. While this isn't a big issue if you choose to keep it, please know that other RPers may not be able to interpret it or reference it.

And finally, cats can have violet eyes as a result of a rare genetic mutation, however all cats with this mutation are blind or suffer severe sunburns whenever they look around in day time. We try to be as realistic as possible here when regarding eye colours and fur colours on WCC. If you were to have a cat with violet eyes, Greykit will have to be basically blind.

All of this information could have been read in our Rules section. If you plan on RPing at WCC, I would highly recommend that you do so ASAP.