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Subject: Re: ------------------- Tue 10 Dec 2013 - 19:01

Hey, welcome to WCC!

First thing's first: this looks awesome. However, while we are not a traditional site, we prefer it if your cat's name reflects their appearance. 'Soul' does not describe his appearance, and I'm afraid I'll have to ask you to change it.

Secondly, your RP sample is pretty good. The script style is very close to our style of roleplay; it is just like the books. Instead of putting asterisks around our paragraphs, we put quotation marks around the words. Simply put, your sample would instead be:

Soulkit perked his ears straight up as the sound of scurrying feet filled his ears. He opened his mouth slightly to take in a heavy scent of mice. He sniffed the ground trying to find where they were, but just then a tabby cat jumped in and scared them away. "Hey! I was hunting those, you know!"

Just fix that and I'll approve it- then you can start roleplaying.

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Turtlefur || Tom || RiverClan T5 Warrior || Requirements || #cc9900
Goldenstar || She-cat || WindClan T5 Leader || Requirements || burlywood
Lynxpetal || She-cat || SkyClan Queen || darkblue
Lightningpaw || Tom || WindClan Apprentice || #dfd47e
Creekpaw || She-cat || RiverClan Apprentice || #4c5682

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Achillia wrote:: First thing's first: this looks awesome. However, while we are not a traditional site, we prefer it if your cat's name reflects their appearance. 'Soul' does not describe his appearance, and I'm afraid I'll have to ask you to change it.

No, no, no.

Their name can be whatever they want it to be. Prefixes reflecting appearances is a traditional rule. We removed traditionalism in the first place to avoid having to force people to change their names, not to just slightly expand the pool of available prefixes (which was basically what we literally had before, except we called it semi-traditionalism).

Saying we're not a traditional site but then forcing people to change their prefixes to be more traditional is silly.

They can still stay Icekit if they want, I'm just saying. For future reference.

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Subject: Re: ------------------- Wed 11 Dec 2013 - 4:40

I'm sorry, I thought it said in the rules that the name had to at least reflect the cat's appearance. My mistake. You can be whichever name you choose, Soul. Either way, you're approved.

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Turtlefur || Tom || RiverClan T5 Warrior || Requirements || #cc9900
Goldenstar || She-cat || WindClan T5 Leader || Requirements || burlywood
Lynxpetal || She-cat || SkyClan Queen || darkblue
Lightningpaw || Tom || WindClan Apprentice || #dfd47e
Creekpaw || She-cat || RiverClan Apprentice || #4c5682

Subject: Re: ------------------- Wed 11 Dec 2013 - 12:10

Just make sure that you role play in third person x3 so instead of saying:

"Wow, this place was even bigger than you thought! All those days being inside the nursery felt like hundreds of moons. Today was your first day of being an apprentice."

It should look like this:

"Wow, this place was even bigger than he thought! All those days being inside the nursery felt like hundreds of moons. Today was his first day of being an apprentice."