Lavenderspark
 
Number of posts : 5
Age : 25
 | | Subject: Cinderkit Of ShadowClan Wed 6 Feb 2013 - 6:01 | |
| Cat Name: Cinderkit/paw/flight Tom or She-Cat: She-Cat Favorite Warriors Character(s): Darkstripe, Silverstream, Ashfur, Scourge, and Bluestar. And lemme just throw out here that I can't STAND Firestar. -_- Familiarity with the series: I have read the first series seven times, and a bit of the second. Appearance:  Personality: Cinderkit is a bit reserved, and this will show as she gets older as well. Usually, she won't speak until spoken to. If it's a friend, however, Cinderkit will talk at a constant rate. Despite her being a bit shy, if someone is getting harmed in the matter, she'll jump right to her paws and scold them. She is very thoughtful, but sometimes makes decisions a bit rashly. Origins: Pure ShadowClan Clan: ShadowClan RP Sample (A short paragraph of how you would RP): Cinderkit watched the frozen precipitation tumble down from the shadowed sky, and her eyes twinkled with amusement. This was the first time she had witnessed snow. A snowflake fell on her nose, and as soon as it came in contact with her warm pelt, it melted and became a droplet. She giggled with glee, pawing at the snowflakes that fell from the Heavens, wishing it could snow all the time.
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Sleepy
Clan/Rank : RiverClan
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Age : 25
| | Subject: Re: Cinderkit Of ShadowClan Wed 6 Feb 2013 - 9:28 | |
| Wow. This is good :D I just think you need to change your name. Here we have this naming system where the prefix has to fit the cat's appearance and the suffix has to fit the cat's skills. You could ask Ebs (here's her profile) for help with that if you need it x3 ______________________________________ ‹‹ former site administrator ››
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Lavenderspark
Number of posts : 5
Age : 25
| | Subject: Re: Cinderkit Of ShadowClan Wed 6 Feb 2013 - 19:15 | |
| Edited! :3 ______________________________________ Open up my eager eyes,
'Cause I'm Mrs. Brightside. |
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Shadow
Former Staff
Characters : Bramblekit
Clan/Rank : Windclan kit
 
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Age : 28
| | Subject: Re: Cinderkit Of ShadowClan Wed 6 Feb 2013 - 19:26 | |
| May I suggest another name such as maybe Gray-, Ash-, or even Cinder-? Of course, there are other names you could choose from but those are some from the top of my head at the moment.
The reason I ask is because we already have a Silverpaw and a recent Silverkit in Shadowclan. I just believe that it would get a little confusing in the long run. Sorry for any inconvenience ;u;
This creation is wonderful by the way :D |
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Lavenderspark
Number of posts : 5
Age : 25
| | Subject: Re: Cinderkit Of ShadowClan Wed 6 Feb 2013 - 19:43 | |
| Oh dear, I'm sorry. xD I need to do my research.
Thank you~ Changing now. ______________________________________ Open up my eager eyes,
'Cause I'm Mrs. Brightside. |
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Shadow
Former Staff
Characters : Bramblekit
Clan/Rank : Windclan kit
Number of posts : 6644
Age : 28
| | Subject: Re: Cinderkit Of ShadowClan Wed 6 Feb 2013 - 20:43 | |
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Lavenderspark
Number of posts : 5
Age : 25
| | Subject: Re: Cinderkit Of ShadowClan Wed 6 Feb 2013 - 21:13 | |
| Thank you! ______________________________________ Open up my eager eyes,
'Cause I'm Mrs. Brightside. |
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