my new kit: starkit

Cat Name: Starkit/ starpaw/ Starlight

Tom or She-Cat: she- cat

Favorite Warriors Character(s): all

Familiarity with the series: ended oman of the stars


Appearance: golden sliky long fur with white patchs and dark green eyes

Personality: playful, smart, loving, caring, protecter



Origins: mom was a kittypet, .. but i was found later abanded




Clan: thunderclan


RP Sample (A short paragraph of how you would RP): Sunlight woke me in the nursery, the wind iced my golden ears i scrammbled to the mossy nest. i curled up and whailed. starkit pushed between her brothers and sisters love and warmth. her mothers softh tongone laped over her head for comfort as she cuffed her older brothers ear playfully. she ran happliy and jumped , pinning him down. starkit opened her jaws to a big yawn and hurried to her mother and fell asleep purring comfortingly.

Hello. Welcome to WCC. c:

This creation seems pretty good except for a few things.

1. 'Star' is a sacred and forbidden name. It is given only as a suffix to cats who become leaders. You'll have to choose a different name. Try to think of something that describes what your golden and white cat looks like. c:

2. We don't roleplay in first person here. I see that you go back and forth between first and third person in your roleplay sample. Try to avoid using "I" and "my". Write like how they do in the books.~

Fix those things and you should be good to go.