Warrior Clan Cats

The future's in your paws. Shape it well.

Roleplay in a cat Clan of warriors. Based off the Warriors series by Erin Hunter. Takes place in an AU before the cats in the books existed.
 
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Swifty

Swifty


Clan/Rank : Windclan Leader~Shadowclan Apprentice~Windclan Warrior
Capricorn Buffalo
Number of posts : 2370
Age : 26

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Comments, (constructive only) criticism, and suggestions welcome :)

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First Life: Swiftstar, Windclan leader.
Second Life: Moonsoul (Moonpaw, he died before he became a warrior.)
Third Life: Silverthorn

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Knight

Knight


Characters : [H]Harebounce, [R]Redsun, [S]Snaildance, [K]Snakepaw
Clan/Rank : RC Tier 4 Warrior; TC Tier 3 Warrior, SC Tier 2 Warrior, WC Apprentice
Leo Dragon
Number of posts : 2557
Gender : anything, baby - kitty was here ♥
Age : 24

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PostSubject: Re: Short story Feedback   Short story Feedback EmptyTue 6 Nov 2012 - 16:56
I loved it! ^^ But now I want to read the next part so bad!

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Harebounce    |    Redsun    |    Snaildance    |    Snakepaw
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"Close your eyes, I'll be here in the mornin'."
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PostSubject: Re: Short story Feedback   Short story Feedback EmptyTue 6 Nov 2012 - 19:37
Where's the next part? I'LL KILL YOU IF YOU DON'T COME OUT WITH IT! *grabs harpoon* Yes, It's that good. :3
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Ice Cream Zombie

Ice Cream Zombie


Clan/Rank : |L|Thunderclan/Elder|S|Shadowclan/Young Warrior|C|Windclan/Young Warrior
Number of posts : 1392

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PostSubject: Re: Short story Feedback   Short story Feedback EmptyTue 6 Nov 2012 - 19:57
Threatening isn't the nicest way to get what you want...

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Swifty

Swifty


Clan/Rank : Windclan Leader~Shadowclan Apprentice~Windclan Warrior
Capricorn Buffalo
Number of posts : 2370
Age : 26

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PostSubject: Re: Short story Feedback   Short story Feedback EmptyTue 22 Jan 2013 - 19:04
I'm sorry guys, I didn't know that anyone was expecting a next part (even though I said I would ._.) . I kinda went inactive, but I will work on another part and post it soon :)

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First Life: Swiftstar, Windclan leader.
Second Life: Moonsoul (Moonpaw, he died before he became a warrior.)
Third Life: Silverthorn

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