Please tell me what you think of my storey.....

>2 Sides to the Storey<....
Natalie woke up at 7:00 [the normal time for school.] She got up and turned on her radio. It was her favorite singer on. [Even if her friends hated his guts.... and well everything else about him]. She put on some blue jeans and a base-ball shirt. It was almost summer. Then she ran down stairs and put her hair in a ponytail. As the bus pulled up she grabbed a granola bar. And ran out the door. On the bus Natalie sat down next to her second best friend Alyssa."Sup Nat?" "Oh nothing'. I guess..." Today was going to be a long day.....


this is the first part...i will up load the next part later today.....

here is the second part:

Dustin heard his mom calling his name. He woke up slowly “Dustin wake up!” First day at a public school!” joy he thought to himself. So he got ready. They pulled in to school at 8:20am. Perfect just when the principal wanted me here! He walked right in to the principal’s office. “Hello principal Rasiegood!” “Oh you must be Dustin!””The major singer heart throb “she said it as if it was a bad thing. “It’s a pleasure to have you here!” “It is a pleaser to be here Mrs.Rasiegood” “NOW” she said clapping her hand together. She handed him a pink schedule. “These are your teachers and classes.” GO there now they will tell you what they want you to do……
Okay so this is your P.E locker so you can get changed. You can wait outside until the bell rings. Your teacher will be Mr.bellyoff. Dustin walked outside not paying attention where he was going and before he knew it he ran right in to a girl….