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Cat Name: Sunnykit/paw/forest

Tom or She-Cat: she-cat

Favorite Warriors Character(s): Hollyleaf, Dovewing

Familiarity with the series: Very

Appearance: Dappled taby, with grey eyes when sun hits them, but green whenever else (Look at my avatar)

Personality: Sweet, but will fight like TigerClan

Origins: Rouge/Kittypet adopted by SkyClan

RP Sample (A short paragraph of how you would RP): Sunnyforest bolted up a tree and taunted her Clanmates. "Slowpokes!" she purred

It's really good. Except, We can't have words like sun in our name. Sorry for the inconvienence. And we role play in third tense such as:

Greypaw bolted up a tree, balancing on a branch. She looked down at her attacker. "Come and get me!" the grey and black apprentice taunted.

Hello!

Nice creation, but a few things could be fixed.

First, what Clan are you in for origins?

Second, we RP in third person. *Example below*

RP Example-- Wisppaw dashed through the forest, paws flying across the ground. He skidded to a halt and panted. Wow, what a run! he thought happily.

Welcome to WCC! ^^ I'm glad you figured out the template and posting.

For your RP Sample, it must be in past tense and full sentences, as if you were reading a story and your post was part of it. I'll give you a few examples:

Sunkit raced out of the nursery, excited to finally see the camp with her own eyes. She gazed about in wonder, her green eyes wide.
"Wow," she breathed.

Sunpaw bolted up the tree, pausing and balancing herself on one of the branches.
"Come and get me!" she taunted her clanmates, who were still on the forest floor.


You can fix it by using the edit button in the top right corner of your post. ^^

Okay, I see you edited your RP Sample. It's better than before, but still needs some improving. (:

You don't need * on either side of the actions. Try to make it look like it came right out of a book. ^^

Cat name: Brightkit

Tom or She-cat: Tom

Favorite Warriors Character(s): Dovewing, Lionblaze, Firestar

Familiarity with the series: Read almost every book

Appearance: A all black cat w/ green eyes (see picture at bottom)

Personality: kind, understanding, but not afraid to fight

Origins: Thunderclan cat (Brightheart)

RP Sample (A short paragraph of how you would RP): Brightkit wondered out of the nursery for the first time, and seen all of the different cats wondering who they were

Brightkit, please make a new topic for your creation. Don't post it in someone else's. Thank you. ^^

Sorry, but is this approved?

Well, honestly, you've already started roleplaying and have proved to be a good roleplayer...
So I don't see why not. cx But that's just my personal opinion.

Haha, next time please wait to be approved before roleplaying x3

Sorry... *dummydance*