Stonekit's Creation

Cat Name: Stonekit

Tom or She-Cat: She-cat

Favorite Warriors Character(s): Jayfeather, Graystripe :tearyplz:

Familiarity with the series: All the books :likeasirplz:

Appearance: Dark gray she-kit

Personality: Quiet, friendly

Origins: RiverClan. Parents died in battle against rogues.

RP Sample (A short paragraph of how you would RP): Stonekit padded from her nest to the nursery entrance. She wanted to see her Clan, to hunt, and to fight for them. Although she couldn't recognize most of the cats she saw, save for the few who frequented the nursery, Stonekit wasn't nervous. They all seemed friendly. She walked up to several warriors, and said, "Hello."

Well, this is pretty good! And welcome to the site! Just one thing; origins means the Clan they are in.

Pretty good! In fact, most of the newer people on here can mess up a lot more some times, o3o. But I'd like to help you out a little by improving it~

First of all, please do not try to use memes in your creation, especially multiple ones. It's a creation, so adding memes in it means that your cat would have something to do with those memes. But that's not the case now, so it's better you do not use them in your creation. Also, the role play sample needs to be a bit longer. It should be a brief paragraph, for example, at least 4 or 5 complete sentences.

The memes don't really matter as long as the person knows how to use them correctly and as long as it doesn't affect the creation in any way cx

but yes, the Role playing sample needs to be just a little bit longer. Once you fix that and PM the secret word to either me, Sleepy, Vash the Bluejay, or Willowstream(Rain), you'll be all set :D