Pinely-san
Characters : Blizzardsky / Sablefur / Palepaw / Larktalon / Patchface / Rowancloud / Sedgeclaw / Owlfang / Pinepaw / Thornpaw / Gorsepaw / Toadpaw / Muddykit / Rookpaw / Daypaw Clan/Rank : [M] RiverClan Apprentice [R] ShadowClan Apprentice [D] ThunderClan Apprentice Number of posts : 5344 Age : 25
| Subject: Cool Plots for My Next Lives Thu 5 Apr 2012 - 13:44 | |
| ooc: If something has a strike in it, that means it has already happened. 2nd Life-Scarletfire- Spoiler:
Go look at the topic "Psycho Killer" ._. 3rd life- Happysoul- Spoiler:
1. Born as the runt. 2. Sees brother get murdered by mother. 3. His mother gets exiled and is forced out of the Clan with his sister because his mother stole them. (And their Dad tagged along xD) 4. Scarletfire changes their names to Scarlet, Gold, Happy, and Violet because she wants them to forget about the Clans. 5. His mother is pissed at them for blabbing about seeing Inkkit murdered by her so she abuses them. 6. Happy now has a missing ear. 7. Happy wanders out, hoping to find some food for his family when he runs into Dawnpaw. He has forgotten her. 8. Happy falls in love with Dawnpaw and ends up meeting her a lot in the next few moons. 9. His mother notices what he has been doing, and has forbidden him to do so any longer. 10. Happy goes to meet Dawnpaw one last time anyways, and with his luck, Scarletfire was following. 11. In sheer anger, Scarletfire slashed his remaining eye, causing him to go completely blind. To top it off, she ripped off his long, bushy tail. 12. Happy had watched Scarletfire attack Dawnpaw before his eye was mangled, and he watched her bleed on the ground before the last of his sight faded away. 13. Happy lay there when his mother walked away, asking the unconscious Dawnpaw if she could hear him. 14. Happy believed that the she-cat that he loved had died. 15. Happy vows to his sister that he would save them. He missed seeing her face, but he knew his mother had messed hers up as well, and seeing that would probably make him even more upset. 16. Happy becomes extremely insecure, flinching at everybody's words, being skittish while hunting, and talking very quickly. 17. His mother finally gets murdered by (some person x3) and he is so relieved. Him and his sister show affection to each other for surviving her wrath. 18. Happy goes to join ShadowClan to, hopefully, recieve a Clan name. 19. Happysoul (when he becomes a warrior even though he's was of warrior age) knows that his fears had just begun; his mother had begun haunting him and screwing around with his mind. 20. Happysoul ends up murdering someone somewhere in these steps because of how confused he was becoming; his mother was urging him to kill. 21. Happysoul begins to beat himself up; throwing himself into trees because of the mental image of his mother following him and telling him to. 22. He sometimes fights with the air, which he sees as his mother, and, mentally, believes she is attacking him and making him bleed. He begins to yowl with pain as blood trickles down his body (but it's not actually there). Until he actually begins to hurt himself as if it were his mother controlling his crazy claws. Then, his wounds became real. 23. Happysoul would not tell anyone his problems, believing he could handle them himself. 24. Happysoul, somewhere in these steps, realizes Dawnpaw is alive. 25. (With her freakin' permission x3) Happysoul becomes Dawnpaw's secwit mate. 26. Yeap. I'm done for now. Some to be added, kk?
4th life- Blackace- Spoiler:
Not made yet >3>
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Stormi the Gummy
Clan/Rank : {Storm}Riverclan/Experienced Warrior {Adder}Thunderclan/Experienced Warrior {Red}Shadowclan/Experienced Warrior {Wolf}Shadowclan/Apprentice Number of posts : 3741 Age : 25
| Subject: Re: Cool Plots for My Next Lives Thu 5 Apr 2012 - 14:50 | |
| Is BlackACE an actual name? Where does the "ace" come from? Anyways cool plot! Have you and Dawnpaw planned all this out already? Also, if he becomes blind, he has a small chance of becoming a...successful warrior, unless he has very keen senses, like Jayfeather. Even then, it would be hard to battle, considering no tail would mean having to learn how to fight blind and unbalanced. But it's your plot :P. However, there could be to where he regains his sight in the other eye, to make it easier, (just a suggestion :O) and how would he be able to control himself, around other cats other than himself if his mother is after him? Lol like will she kill him or will he stop her from haunting him once and for all? Can't wait to see(well I can but you know l:3) ______________________________________ |
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Pinely-san
Characters : Blizzardsky / Sablefur / Palepaw / Larktalon / Patchface / Rowancloud / Sedgeclaw / Owlfang / Pinepaw / Thornpaw / Gorsepaw / Toadpaw / Muddykit / Rookpaw / Daypaw Clan/Rank : [M] RiverClan Apprentice [R] ShadowClan Apprentice [D] ThunderClan Apprentice Number of posts : 5344 Age : 25
| Subject: Re: Cool Plots for My Next Lives Thu 5 Apr 2012 - 15:31 | |
| Like, an ace at something? >>;
Yeap. He's completely useless, but he still tries :U Can't help a fella for trying.
And, no. He can't control himself around other cats. He tries to kill them sometimes >3>
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Stormi the Gummy
Clan/Rank : {Storm}Riverclan/Experienced Warrior {Adder}Thunderclan/Experienced Warrior {Red}Shadowclan/Experienced Warrior {Wolf}Shadowclan/Apprentice Number of posts : 3741 Age : 25
| Subject: Re: Cool Plots for My Next Lives Thu 5 Apr 2012 - 19:35 | |
| Darn it XD ______________________________________ |
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Thistle (Angel)
Clan/Rank : T:WC Kit R:TC Kit S:SC Kit Number of posts : 2040 Age : 25
| Subject: Re: Cool Plots for My Next Lives Fri 6 Apr 2012 - 13:34 | |
| Can Violet murder Scarlet?
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| Subject: Re: Cool Plots for My Next Lives Fri 6 Apr 2012 - 13:37 | |
| Or can Greyfeather since she vowed revenge apon Nightclaw that she would kill Scarlet |
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Pinely-san
Characters : Blizzardsky / Sablefur / Palepaw / Larktalon / Patchface / Rowancloud / Sedgeclaw / Owlfang / Pinepaw / Thornpaw / Gorsepaw / Toadpaw / Muddykit / Rookpaw / Daypaw Clan/Rank : [M] RiverClan Apprentice [R] ShadowClan Apprentice [D] ThunderClan Apprentice Number of posts : 5344 Age : 25
| Subject: Re: Cool Plots for My Next Lives Sat 5 May 2012 - 9:30 | |
| This is almost a day too late to be posting in this, but I saved ittt! ^^
For the first question, not sure yet...
and for the second question, lol not in a million years, Grey xD ______________________________________ |
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Shadow Former Staff
Characters : Bramblekit Clan/Rank : Windclan kit Number of posts : 6644 Age : 29
| Subject: Re: Cool Plots for My Next Lives Sat 5 May 2012 - 18:47 | |
| It should be Shadow that does o-o *shot* lolnaw... go along with your little plot cx |
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