About Minkkit

Cat Name:Minkkit
Tom or She-Cat: Tom

Favorite Warriors Character(s): Ivypool, Dovewing, And Loinblaze

Familiarity with the seres: Read almost all

Appearance: Black pelt. Deep pine green eyes, Has a missing right claw of black left foot.

Personality: Does not take jokes if it's about me. Bad with other kits. Good with older cats.

Origins: WindClan

RP Sample (A short paragraph of how you would RP): Minkkit lowered his body, breathing lightly. Minkkit swished his tail back and forth. Claws showing, he jumps on the mouse, not killing it. He grabs it with his right paw mewing: "Life not fair, is it?" Minkkit purred letting the mouse go.

Minkkit wrote:

RP Sample (A short paragraph of how you would RP): Killerkit lowered his body, breathing lightly. Killerkit swished his tail back and forth. Claws showing, he jumps on the mouse, not killing it. He grabs it with his right paw mewing: "Life not fair, is it?" Killerkit purred letting the mouse go.

This. Here. I want to show you a revised version. Also, Killerkit probably won't be the name of a kit. Ever.

"Killerkit lowered his body, breathing lightly. He swished his tail back and forth. Claws showing, he jumped on the mouse, not killing it. He grabbed it with his right paw. "Life isn't fair, is it?" he mewed. Killerkit purred, and let the mouse go.

The italics show where you went wrong. Hope it helped!~ We RP in past tense.

Kits have bad grammar, May. And he wants it to be an evil kit. And he did use past tense, or I'm blind and can't see where he edited.

"jumps on the mouse" "grabs it with his right paw"

There. I was just being nice. It doesn't mean that he/she has good grammar, but I wanted to be nice and nicely correct them. Anyway, seriously? I was just stating the truth about the name. eue

I'm talking about the fact he purred, not the name. And, He used past tense.

:u I didn't italic that part. I moved the part before it, that's why it's italic'd.

You two, get out of here! >:c

Mink- Is your cat just not very social, or are they evil? We would prefer that cats not decide to be evil until they're older. Also, red isn't really an eye color of cats. Can you fix those? (:

Ugh, sorry I'll change it

I'm still curious about whether your cat is truly evil or what their story is.

Send me the Secret Word, and I can approve.

Approved~

Yay!!

Yes!! A new Skyclaner! Congrats and wellcome to SkyClan. :)