Warrior Clan Cats

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Roleplay in a cat Clan of warriors. Based off the Warriors series by Erin Hunter. Takes place in an AU before the cats in the books existed.
 
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Sagittarius Buffalo
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PostSubject: Creating Shatters   Creating Shatters EmptySun 29 Jan 2012 - 13:39

Cat Name: original name:Grindle. New name: Shatteredkit-paw-song

Tom or She-Cat: Tom,obviously :meowla:

Favorite Warriors Character(s): Brokenstar, Tigerstar, Hawkfrost, Yellowfang, Thistleclaw, and Scourge.

Familiarity with the series: I've read every book except the most recent one. I would read it, but I have no money to download it on my kindle. :butbut:

Appearance: Shatteredkit is a tall, wiry tom with wavy blueish-red and brown fur and rather large, kit-like ears. He has bloodshot pale yellow eyes with red irises. His eyes have rings around them from his insane lack of sleep. He has four scars on his chest, three on his neck, and three on his right hip. He has three small tears on the inside of his right ear. His tail is rather long and bushy, with downy fur. He's five (and three quarters) moons old.

Personality: Because of his sister, Gremlin, he's constantly being shunned by those who know of his sister. He's quiet, and if he doesn't respond, he's not ignoring the cat or being rude, he's just deep in thought. He has a very clever, cunning mind and uses it to his advantage. He never says anything without saying it in his mind a few times, and he is sometimes very repetitive. In battle, he likes to play around with his opponent, bringing them into a state of confusion before finally attacking. He's very anti-social, but he can't stand being alone, as it scares him. He doesn't quite grasp he whole warrior code-thing, but he's a loyal clanmate. Unfortunatly, it's hard to be-friend him, as he's always serious and doesn't trust people easily. He is determined not to become like his sister, Gremlin, and tries his best to suppress his inner violent side, Sildon, that is often fed with snide comments and hostility.

Origins: Assuming that origin means where he was born, his mother, Immashu, died after giving birth to him outside a tavern. because his father was dead, Gremlin took her half brother in and named him Grindle. They went traveling together, Gremlin often killing a lot of the area's residents(cats). Grindle never took part in the massacres(sp?), and instead tried to find places to stay. Eventually, Gremlin was captured and put into the humane society, casting Grindle, who had been waching the clans because they happened to be in the area, alone. He re-named himself Shatteredkit, because he wanted to choose his own clan name, and set off to join a clan.

RP Sample (A short paragraph of how you would RP):Uhm...I'm just gonna make something up... 0.0

Grindle ran after his sister, thrilled yet araid after what she'd just done. To say the least, it was entertaining. Gremlin made a sharp turn and Grindle followed suit. They stood in silence before Grindle began speaking.
"Gremlin, do you think we'll be caught?"He asked in a shrill, whispery voice. His sister shook his head.
'Nah, we should be all right...For now."

Was that long enough to be a sample? Usually my posts are longer. :keepyourllama!




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Rainy

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Characters : Heatherpaw
Pisces Buffalo
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PostSubject: Re: Creating Shatters   Creating Shatters EmptySun 29 Jan 2012 - 14:43

Your RP sample was long enough. And pretty good.

However, I'm feeling a little iffy about your cat's appearance and the name. I don't understand that 'wavy blueish-red' fur, or yellow eyes with red irises. It's just not something cats really look like. And where can he have gotten so many scars in such a short time?

If you can find me a picture (not an edited photo, one that is real and exists), then I will allow that appearance. Otherwise, it's unrealistic, and you must change it.

An evil side? With a name?

Which clan did he join?

I'm going to ask you to THOROUGHLY read all of our rules, please.
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Jay


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PostSubject: Re: Creating Shatters   Creating Shatters EmptySun 29 Jan 2012 - 16:42

No red in the appearance.

Also, how'd this cat get the name Shattered? What made the mom go: "loldisisshatteredkitteh"

We are going a little more traditional. Explain the second thing, and get rid of the first.

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