i need help please show me suggestions - lillykit

Cat name: Lillykit
Tom or She-cat: She-cat
Favorite Warrior characters: Cinderpelt
Familiarity with series: im on Moonrise second book of new propechy
Look: Light grey she-cat with a fluffy tail and piercing blue eyes
Personality: shy and likes to be alone , she loves to sit in the rain and play in the water
Origins: She was abandoned by her family as soon as she was old enough to fend for herself. Her mom taught her to swim and catch prey all she had to do after she left her was survive.
Lillykit crouched keeping her eyes on the mouse before her. She breathed in deeply before leaping from the bush onto the prey, with a quick swipe she picked up the limp mouse and dashed away before anyone could catch her.

Hiya Lilykit! :3
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thanks so much

Wonderful! :3

Now just PM me the secret word from the rules, and I'll get you approved! ^^

Approved! ^^

thanks!