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| You like? :3 | | Awful. Revolting grammar and terrible story. | | 0% | [ 0 ] | | Eh... There was quite a few things wrong.. | | 0% | [ 0 ] | | It was okay. It was a bit wobbly.. | | 0% | [ 0 ] | | It was good. Not bad. | | 0% | [ 0 ] | | I liked it! Good job!:p | | 18% | [ 2 ] | | I loved it! Do moooooore! >W< | | 82% | [ 9 ] |
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not fish
Clan/Rank : Professional zombie.
 
Number of posts : 6614
Gender : what is gender
Age : 26
| | Subject: Warriors: The Torn Soul - Review Sun 14 Aug 2011 - 13:07 | |
| Review for my fanfic, Warriors: The Torn Soul.
And please, if you read the intro, remember, it's slightly different from the roleplay. ______________________________________ i was fish the whole time, surprise
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Feath ❤️
Number of posts : 2815
Age : 27
| | Subject: Re: Warriors: The Torn Soul - Review Sun 14 Aug 2011 - 13:18 | |
| Dude. I wanna copy your idea and make Fea's life DDDDD; ______________________________________ |
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not fish
Clan/Rank : Professional zombie.
Number of posts : 6614
Gender : what is gender
Age : 26
| | Subject: Re: Warriors: The Torn Soul - Review Sun 14 Aug 2011 - 13:36 | |
| Go right ahead. >W< The idea doesn't belong to me. :3 ______________________________________ i was fish the whole time, surprise
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Sun
Former Staff
Characters : Turtlefur, Goldenstar, Lynxpetal, Creekpaw, Lightningpaw
Clan/Rank : RiverClan Warrior, WindClan Leader, SkyClan Queen RiverClan Apprentice, WindClan Apprentice
 
Number of posts : 8190
Gender : it
Age : 25
| | Subject: Re: Warriors: The Torn Soul - Review Sun 14 Aug 2011 - 13:57 | |
| I lurve it :D Chu make Sun so sassy and stubborn! XD fits her perfectly ______________________________________ Sun // Living Characters // Deceased Characters
Turtlefur || Tom || RiverClan T5 Warrior || Requirements || #cc9900
Goldenstar || She-cat || WindClan T5 Leader || Requirements || burlywood
Lynxpetal || She-cat || SkyClan Queen || darkblue
Lightningpaw || Tom || WindClan Apprentice || #dfd47e
Creekpaw || She-cat || RiverClan Apprentice || #4c5682
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not fish
Clan/Rank : Professional zombie.
Number of posts : 6614
Gender : what is gender
Age : 26
| | Subject: Re: Warriors: The Torn Soul - Review Sun 14 Aug 2011 - 14:02 | |
| Lolo. xD I'm too lazy to write more than one chapter on one day. ;A; ______________________________________ i was fish the whole time, surprise
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Sun
Former Staff
Characters : Turtlefur, Goldenstar, Lynxpetal, Creekpaw, Lightningpaw
Clan/Rank : RiverClan Warrior, WindClan Leader, SkyClan Queen RiverClan Apprentice, WindClan Apprentice
Number of posts : 8190
Gender : it
Age : 25
| | Subject: Re: Warriors: The Torn Soul - Review Sun 14 Aug 2011 - 14:38 | |
| lol XD the best part so far is when she tricks Dead into thinking he killed her XD you're the best writer I've seen yet :P Don't forget Jaggedlines. I'm not sure how he got his warrior if he died as a kit, though... ______________________________________ Sun // Living Characters // Deceased Characters
Turtlefur || Tom || RiverClan T5 Warrior || Requirements || #cc9900
Goldenstar || She-cat || WindClan T5 Leader || Requirements || burlywood
Lynxpetal || She-cat || SkyClan Queen || darkblue
Lightningpaw || Tom || WindClan Apprentice || #dfd47e
Creekpaw || She-cat || RiverClan Apprentice || #4c5682
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Feath ❤️
Number of posts : 2815
Age : 27
| | Subject: Re: Warriors: The Torn Soul - Review Sun 14 Aug 2011 - 14:48 | |
| Lolololol. We had that kit battle, den we had to clean out the dumb fresh kill pile DD: ______________________________________ |
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Sun
Former Staff
Characters : Turtlefur, Goldenstar, Lynxpetal, Creekpaw, Lightningpaw
Clan/Rank : RiverClan Warrior, WindClan Leader, SkyClan Queen RiverClan Apprentice, WindClan Apprentice
Number of posts : 8190
Gender : it
Age : 25
| | Subject: Re: Warriors: The Torn Soul - Review Sun 14 Aug 2011 - 14:49 | |
| lol sorry, my fault, I shouldn't have kicked him that direction XD ______________________________________ Sun // Living Characters // Deceased Characters
Turtlefur || Tom || RiverClan T5 Warrior || Requirements || #cc9900
Goldenstar || She-cat || WindClan T5 Leader || Requirements || burlywood
Lynxpetal || She-cat || SkyClan Queen || darkblue
Lightningpaw || Tom || WindClan Apprentice || #dfd47e
Creekpaw || She-cat || RiverClan Apprentice || #4c5682
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Feath ❤️
Number of posts : 2815
Age : 27
| | Subject: Re: Warriors: The Torn Soul - Review Sun 14 Aug 2011 - 15:06 | |
| I know, what was up with that Sun DD:
XD ______________________________________ |
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