Venturing out of camp! (Death topic! :D)

OOC: 'Cause I don't like my charicter. >.<

BIC: Evilkit smiled to herself. She was out of camp, by herself. She sniffed the air and followed and acrid scent. It lead her to the Thunderpath. "Oh, wow!" she mewed to herself, laying a black paw onto the tarmac. She pushed it down harder to make sure it was stable. "This looks like fun!" She laughed to herself, "I'll sneak into ThunderClan!"She started walking onto the Thunderpath. All the voices in her head said she should turn back, but one said keep going. She reached the middle of the
Thunderpath, pausing. Should I do it? she thought, worried. Suddenly she heard a rumbling sound. She was frozen in terror as a giant monster hurtled towards her. She screamed as it crashed into her. She was flung across, back into her own territory. She was followed by a stream of blood. She gently took her last breath and closed her eyes.

"Eeep!" a voice came from the bushes.The newest member of Shadowclan,Tawnypaw,had been out exploring the territory.Her paws where covered in blood,for she had walked into the puddle of blood."Ahhhh!" she yowled,looking at her paws.She then seen Evilkit,the cat she had seen in her dream,was lying dead right onfront of her

Evilkits spirit twinkled from the dead body. "Sorry," she mewed, looking away from Tawnypaw.

Tawnypaw let out a surprised meow."Its err... ok I guess" she mewed sadly

Metalshard watched from the bushes "oh no...." she murrmered as she leaped out of the bushles and rushed to the Shadowclan cats. Putting a paw of the kit, its heart had stoped. She sighed "Starclan has tooken another life." She pulled the body onto Shadowclans side she dipped her head to the apprentice and bolted back to thunderclans border and into the brush.

ooc-She's already on Shadowclan's side.Read better.

occ- who asked you? .-.

ooc-No-one.But I can post where I want.I had a REASON.And you do need to read better..

OOC: When my cats daughter dies, PLEASE TELL ME!!!!! I hate being out of the loop >.<