Taking Stormkit to Thunderclan

Snowclaw nodded.

"I want to stay with the kit!" complained Metalpaw "I found him!"

Deadfrost growled. "That's an order, Metalpaw. Respect your warriors. You can talk to him later. Now, go do something useful with Dapplepaw."

Dapplepaw growled. "Come on Metalpaw, let's do something 'useful'" she snorted before picking up her mouse and stalking away. Why can't he treat me like an older apprentice. I'm not a kit. Her fur bristled on her shoulders.

Why can't Deadfrost be respectfull of me? Metalpaw thought angrily as she walked away "He always has to show up."

"I know. Wanna hide in the bushes and listen?? The business of the CLan is our concern!!" she hissed, eyes glowing in michievnous(?).

OOC: Dude. .-. Not cool. You have to respect him, he's a warrior. The most senior one in the Clan besides Leo and Goldie.

IC: Deadfrost blinked. "Oh? Is that so? Well, I don't think you'd mind if I go tell Leopardheart about your disrespect." He raised an eyebrow and left Stormkit to Snowclaw as he left to go find Leopardheart. "Come along, apprentices, lest you be in even more trouble."

Snowclaw looked at Stormkit."Do you want to come with me?" she mewed in a soothing voice.
OOC:Snow has tonnes of kits .3.

"I didn't do anything wrong Deadfrost." Metalpaw mewed "I respect every cat in this clan, from the smallet kit to our great leader Goldenstar, I am not worthie of punishment, I wasn't even going to do what Beech was." Metalpaw stood up perfectly still in respect and spoke turthfully. "I was simply trying to help, if its ok I would like some appretieantion for what I do insted of troble." Metalpaws words were, yes, sopken out, but they were respectfull. She thought Deadfrost was being a little to hard on her.
OCC- Deadfrost, metalpaw is the most respectfull apprentice (or i try to make her be) she didnt DO anything, beech wanted to hind in the bushes she wasnt going to.

OCC: Stop trying to suck up to avoid punishmentt >>;

OC- shes not. what shes saying is her not trying to sound dissrespectfull and also speck out. Thats how she is and nothing more. SHE WAS NOT BEING RUDE >:U

ooc: Ahem. She's talking back to Deadfrost... No matter how "respecful and good" it may sound, it's still backtalking and very rude and disrespectful. He should be able to have you clean the elders for moons by now, since you won't gtfo. o3o Ktnxbai.

OOC: Thank you Ebs and Leo. :D You both proved very good points.

Occ- *sigh..* I bet your just doing this because its me...

ooc: And quit feeling sorry for yourself. n3n