24 Hours Review

So, what did you think?

I liked it <3 oh,but I was wondering if it was to late to be in the story?

I can have a couple of people come late, but the mansion might be locked. .

It was awesome. Though, indenting could organize it better. But besides that, it's awesome and detailed :D

Indenting? Like, the use of the Tab key? That doesn't work, I've tried it before ;~;

O can I be in it?heres the character thingy just in case
user name:bitterkit
real name:tsume
age:15
appearance:tall with long black hair that covers left side of face.japanese.usually wears colored skinny jeans,t-shirts or drag.
personality:easy going,but has rapid mood swings and a deppression issur.likes to listen to favorite band(korn)on ipod
extras:has a lot of different meds X3
sorry for not posting this sooner,and in the wrong place

@Bitter: There's a topic for that. I'd prefer you posted it in there, so that they're all in once place.

Your tab key doesn't work? Aw, well I'll let it slide. You were good with the paragraphs at least.

Totally awesome Rain! Yay! I confused Jay XD

Wait..What happened to me?And Lily?

Luffed eet >D :laa:
still... you better update soon. xD :writing:

@Hazel: I mentioned you. I'll go put Lily in. Sorry, you guys are easily overlooked since I don't know either of you that well.

I'M NAWT DAT OLD ;~; I'M NAWT.

I can't wait too see what happens. n.n

Oh could you add me to the story?please?sorry im so annoying

Next chapter, maybe. I don't know, since I had that topic up for a week before I started working on the story.