Seeing my Shine

Dragonsoul was happily enjoying her new death in Starclan, after Sandnose had alowed her to come back. Her scars had finally healed and she was well fed again as well as hydrated. A cats figure begen to form as she looked up.

Shinepaw appeared out of the form. She stood there, dazed for a moment. Then she looked up, and saw her mother, Dragonsoul. A single tear streamed down her face. She ran towards her mother, and sat down infront of her. "Oh, mommy! I have so much to tell you!" She mewed like a joyful kit, bouncing around.

Dragonsoul brightened "Shinepaw!" she mewed happily as she got up and nuzzled her kit. "Hello, im so glad to see you." she mewed. "I was watching that fighted you had with those no good skyclan warriors" she mewed looking down on Shinepaw then smiled "You did a good job, holding your geound, and Metalpaw what a great best friend to have." she went on like an elder.

Shinepaw brightened as her mother praised her. "Mommy, guess what?" She mewed excitedly. "I'm a Medicine Cat Apprentence!" She mewed proudly.


Occ- Sorry, I only got on today cause I was sleeping over at Laurens.

"A medicen cat apprentice?!" she mewed surprised. Dragonsoul looked down and shook her head. A cold wind woshed by as Starclan Did when they dissapreoved. Two red eyes flashed on the dark forests side and Dragonsoul looked up again. "Lets walk this way." she mewed as she nugged Shinepaw away from the dsrk forest border. "Why did you become a Medicen cat?" she asked. "You cant be a Medicen cat, that puts you grave danger." she mewed. "What about your revenge on the one that killed me, you cant do that if your a medicen cat." she explained.

Occ- Solfang wants mel and shine to kill snakefire and lightingeye, you wount be able to if you walk close to starclan. She will want to kill you.

Occ- So, what rain? I can be a MC if I want.

Ic- Shinepaw froze beside her mother. Anger flared like fire in in her blue eyes. "So you dissaprove of my choice?" She spat at her mother. "I thought you would be more proud of me!"

Occ- I know, i have no problem with that. Its my charries that mind, make sure to do what your charries would do not you.


Ic- "Not at all, I love that your doing this and im proud." she mewed. "Its others that dont like it." she looked around. "Take care of yourself and stay close to your friends." she mewed.

Occ- That is what she would do....

Ic- Shinepaw's eyes slowly started to get calmer, and her body relaxed. She looked down. "Mother, what if I just make them suffer in life, instead of dying." She mewed, wondering what her mother was going to say.

Dragonsoul shrugged "Its up to you, what do you feel is right, make sure you discuse your disisions with Metalpaw, she will help guide you." she mewed. "The stars watch over Metalpaw, as long as you with her, the stars will watch over you."

Shinepaw looked up at her mother. She smiled. "I have to go, mother. I love you!" She called as her figure evaporated, and there was nothing left.

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