Brambleflame, Blazepaw, Sunpaw, and Featherpaw

Sunpaw stared whistfully at the struggling toms.
"Don't hurt him too bad..."
She said to Brambleflame.

He hopped off, "So you just want love?" He hissed. "Well, stop flirting with my mate!"

Blazepaw started to cry and started apdding off with his neck in pain looking back at SunPaw disappointed hse didn't do anything.

"Blazepaw, don't leave." He mewed. "I'm protective, but it's because I really love her." his muscles flexed in sorrow.

Blazpaw socffed and kept walking.

"Get back here." He ordered.

OOC: HE ORDRED? Bramble you cant just command peopel liek they're your henchmen.

Blazepaw kept walking.

ooc: it is just a meaning of dialog...

ic: "What's your problem?"

Sunpaw stepped in front of him.
"Blazepaw, i'm sorry. You hurt Featherpaw bad. I had hoped Brambleflame could talk scence into you, not beat it into you. But... I hope you know that Featherpaw may not want you anymore. Maybe because you don't seem to really love her. Or because she doesn't love you. But I want you to know, if you can't have me, and you can't have her, there's plenty more she-cats in the world."
She said softly, trying not to hurt his feelings.

"Blazepaw, look, i used to hate sunpaw, look at us now! What a difference! Meaning, along life, you will find someone."

Featherpaw watched from the bushes, her back straight. If you looked at her, you wouldn't be able to tell her emotions. She had on a pokerface.

Blazepaw yelled at Sun to ge tit into her head "I don't love anyone else! I lvoed Feather! Maybe Thunderclan isn't for me! I don't lvoe anyone else but Feather and I mean that! I might as well just become a lonar because I don't love anyone else!"

"Then why did you try to get romantically close with Sunpaw!?" He sniffed, "Featherpaw, come out! He is BEGGING for you."

Sunpaw said nothing. She just stood there, staring into him. He was hurt, emotionaly and physicaly, he had been discouraged, attacked and denied. He cried and he chased, but it seemed as if he would never be able to find someone other than Featherpaw.
"Don't hurt her"
She whispered and walked to her mate's side.

Blazepaw said "Because because.....I love them both. SunPaw was my first real crush but then I lvoed the way Feather rteats me so I got a crush on ehr but heres what differiates them. I only tried to make a move on SunPaw to see fi she probably liked me. I wasn't thinkign at that time. I'm just a stupid apprentice that no one should care about. I'm a mousebrained fool like Feather said."

Blazepaw finsiehd what he siad an dstarte dpadding off with his head down.