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| What do you think of NEW BABYLON | | Err....it was okay | | 11% | [ 1 ] | | Epic story guys ^^ | | 22% | [ 2 ] | | Best.Story.Ever. | | 11% | [ 1 ] | | Sucked | | 0% | [ 0 ] | | It was kinda bad | | 0% | [ 0 ] | | TIS WAS THE MOST HORRID BOOK I HAVE EVER READ. QUIT WHILE YOU CAN | | 0% | [ 0 ] | | Ima taco .w. | | 56% | [ 5 ] |
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Jay
 
Number of posts : 9353
Age : 25
| | Subject: NEW BABYLON discussion Thu 28 Oct 2010 - 15:47 | |
| So guys,what do you think of our story? ______________________________________ i used to administrate but the man tore me down
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Leo
Characters : Leopardheart
Clan/Rank : Thunderclan/Former Deputy
Number of posts : 6901
Age : 25
| | Subject: Re: NEW BABYLON discussion Thu 28 Oct 2010 - 16:14 | |
| It's OK, it coulda been a little more descriptive.
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ur fave is problematic and i'm exo trash
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Jay
Number of posts : 9353
Age : 25
| | Subject: Re: NEW BABYLON discussion Thu 28 Oct 2010 - 16:26 | |
| You have gotta be kidding me =.= ______________________________________ i used to administrate but the man tore me down
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Moose~Coldglance
Clan/Rank : Skyclan/deputy
 
Number of posts : 1051
Age : 24
| | Subject: Re: NEW BABYLON discussion Thu 28 Oct 2010 - 16:28 | |
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Swifty
Clan/Rank : Windclan Leader~Shadowclan Apprentice~Windclan Warrior
 
Number of posts : 2370
Age : 26
| | Subject: Re: NEW BABYLON discussion Thu 28 Oct 2010 - 16:35 | |
| I think it's great! Then again, i'm helping write it :/ |
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Leo
Characters : Leopardheart
Clan/Rank : Thunderclan/Former Deputy
Number of posts : 6901
Age : 25
| | Subject: Re: NEW BABYLON discussion Thu 28 Oct 2010 - 16:41 | |
| LOL
Sorry, personally, I write with more detail.
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ur fave is problematic and i'm exo trash
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Brambleh
Clan/Rank : ShadowClan Leader, WindClan apprentice,
Number of posts : 4693
Age : 25
| | Subject: Re: NEW BABYLON discussion Thu 28 Oct 2010 - 16:43 | |
| uh... IMMA TACO! ^^
ya, but it was awesome ______________________________________ Bramblestar, ShadowClan Leader Shadowpaw, WindClan... apprentice.  Stolded from Moon and Ebz >:)   - Spoiler:
 Next life. Shadow <--
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16. DON'T BE OFFENDED BY THE CHATBOX. |
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Jay
Number of posts : 9353
Age : 25
| | Subject: Re: NEW BABYLON discussion Fri 29 Oct 2010 - 12:33 | |
| Thanks so much Leo =.=
If you write with perfect detail throughout the whole story,it won't make so much sense to younger readers. Read the first paragraph and tell me it is not detailed =.=
I usually use extremely vivid vocabulary for the first three or so paragraphs,then turn it down,unless describing a person. i have been writing for a very long time,and am hoping for a great story that lacks many flaws.
Why do you always treat me like craap(purpose misspell,to dodge censor) after I called you a spammer? Now you know how Blossom felt!!! =.= ______________________________________ i used to administrate but the man tore me down
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Swifty
Clan/Rank : Windclan Leader~Shadowclan Apprentice~Windclan Warrior
Number of posts : 2370
Age : 26
| | Subject: Re: NEW BABYLON discussion Fri 29 Oct 2010 - 12:48 | |
| Dun encourage censor dodging Jay >.>" That's the whole purpose of putting a censor in the first place... |
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Jay
Number of posts : 9353
Age : 25
| | Subject: Re: NEW BABYLON discussion Fri 29 Oct 2010 - 13:07 | |
| .....Ima taco .w.
A censor dodging magical taco X3 ______________________________________ i used to administrate but the man tore me down
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