| WWC the novel review | |
|
|
Author | Message |
---|
Jay
Number of posts : 9353 Age : 25
| Subject: WWC the novel review July 23rd 2008, 4:58 pm | |
| Tell me if you liked the story or not here.Also,you can tell me other stuff or submit ideas for the next chapter! |
|
| |
Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: WWC the novel review July 23rd 2008, 9:54 pm | |
| Well there a few things i noticed... you said that Yellowfang was the Medicine Cat but Yellowfang was born in ShadowClan and was not in ThunderClan back then. And Graystripe was not born ten years ago... Sorry. |
|
| |
Jay
Number of posts : 9353 Age : 25
| Subject: Re: WWC the novel review July 24th 2008, 9:28 am | |
| I will fix it it is just in the book i heard Cinderpelt and Leafpaw discussing about Yellowfang and Cinderpelt and Leafpaw were in Thunderclan so.... |
|
| |
Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: WWC the novel review July 24th 2008, 11:31 am | |
| Yea, I would have thought that too. |
|
| |
Mistpelt
Characters : Mistpelt Clan/Rank : RiverClanWarrior Number of posts : 14832 Age : 30
| Subject: Re: WWC the novel review July 28th 2008, 2:10 am | |
| I like it! It's a nice story and a good addition to the site! Although i'm not a ten-year-old cat! lol! ______________________________________ ♪ ~Founder/Owner of WCC~♫ ~Forever a RiverClan Warrior~~Please pm Administrators with queries as I'm not active~ |
|
| |
Jay
Number of posts : 9353 Age : 25
| Subject: Re: WWC the novel review July 28th 2008, 8:39 am | |
| How old a cat are you????Cause i can change the years to 5 |
|
| |
Mistpelt
Characters : Mistpelt Clan/Rank : RiverClanWarrior Number of posts : 14832 Age : 30
| Subject: Re: WWC the novel review July 28th 2008, 11:32 am | |
| naw, it's fine! ______________________________________ ♪ ~Founder/Owner of WCC~♫ ~Forever a RiverClan Warrior~~Please pm Administrators with queries as I'm not active~ |
|
| |
Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: WWC the novel review August 1st 2008, 7:45 pm | |
| Er... Do you intend for Fireclaw to become Firestar? |
|
| |
Jay
Number of posts : 9353 Age : 25
| Subject: Re: WWC the novel review August 1st 2008, 9:53 pm | |
| |
|
| |
Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: WWC the novel review August 1st 2008, 10:12 pm | |
| Well Firestar's warrior name was Fireheart. And again Firestar wasn't born 10 years ago... |
|
| |
Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: WWC the novel review August 2nd 2008, 11:33 am | |
| What Graypaw said..... Sorry bout that. |
|
| |
Jay
Number of posts : 9353 Age : 25
| Subject: Re: WWC the novel review August 2nd 2008, 1:38 pm | |
| ......sigh.............. i will fix it |
|
| |
Mistpelt
Characters : Mistpelt Clan/Rank : RiverClanWarrior Number of posts : 14832 Age : 30
| Subject: Re: WWC the novel review August 2nd 2008, 2:25 pm | |
| it's just a story. it doesn't have to be accurate to the book and the site. well, just do what u want with the story! ______________________________________ ♪ ~Founder/Owner of WCC~♫ ~Forever a RiverClan Warrior~~Please pm Administrators with queries as I'm not active~ |
|
| |
Jay
Number of posts : 9353 Age : 25
| Subject: Re: WWC the novel review November 5th 2008, 5:12 pm | |
| THE SECOND STORY IS UP! 2 CHAPTERS! 2nd IS THE LONGEST CHAPTER I HAVE EVER WRITTEN!
YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
|
| |
Sponsored content
| Subject: Re: WWC the novel review | |
| |
|
| |
| WWC the novel review | |
|