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Dimmeh
Characters : Blackwhisker and Midge, coming soon. Clan/Rank : "WCC's National Treasure" Number of posts : 2850 Age : 22
| Subject: You'd Better be Better [Jaypaw's Assessment, closed for Amberpaw] Sun 15 Jan 2017 - 7:50 | |
| Mottledwing was a very voracious she-cat. She knew that her apprentice must be the same. The mottled red molly sat in the center of the clearing, before padding to the apprentices' den. Her maw parted in a gleeful, open smile. "Jaypaw!" she sang, eyes exploring the damp, dank den for the pale blue she-cat. "Are you here?" Mottledwing inquired, moving forwards with a furrow in her chin due to the grin. A purr rose deep in her throat. "It's time for your assessment," the pretty warrior whispered mystically. ______________________________________ Blacktwig/Blackwhisker --- ThunderClan * Fallowstripe --- StarClan * Goatshade --- StarClan * Bouncepaw --- StarClan * Egretkit --- StarClan |
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Ember Pheonix
Characters : Hazelpaw(deceased), Ambernose(AN)(deceased)) ,Batpaw(mia)(BS), Jaysong(JS)(deceased), Jubilance(MIA), Lichenfang(LF), Cinderfrost( CF), Heathershade(HS)(deceased), Tawnypool(TP)(deceased),Frostpaw(FB) Clan/Rank : Ambernose SC warrior ||||||| Jaysong: TC senior warrior |||||| Lichenpaw TC apprentice ||||||||||||| Cinderpaw TC apprentice ||||||| Heatherpaw WC apprentice Number of posts : 1565
| Subject: Re: You'd Better be Better [Jaypaw's Assessment, closed for Amberpaw] Sun 15 Jan 2017 - 9:14 | |
| Jaypaw was in the den. Hearing her mentor she opened her eyes and looked at her"yes I'm here"Jaypaw mewed. When she heard the news she blinked and was on her paws in an instant"awesome!"she mewed and padded over. ______________________________________ Lichenfang(Elder)(tc) ||||Pantherclaw(young warrior)(tc)||||Amberpaw (apprentice)(sc)||| Sablekit(kit)(TC)|||| Frozenpaw(apprentice)(skc)||Snowpaw (apprentice)(tc) - Jaysong Of Thunderclan(Frost's biological mother) and Frost/frostkit to be of Thunderclan(Jaysong's only daughter) :
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Dimmeh
Characters : Blackwhisker and Midge, coming soon. Clan/Rank : "WCC's National Treasure" Number of posts : 2850 Age : 22
| Subject: Re: You'd Better be Better [Jaypaw's Assessment, closed for Amberpaw] Sun 15 Jan 2017 - 10:27 | |
| "I'll be watching," she said. Mottledwing glided over to a bush, eyes glinting. "And..." she mewed.
"Start!" ______________________________________ Blacktwig/Blackwhisker --- ThunderClan * Fallowstripe --- StarClan * Goatshade --- StarClan * Bouncepaw --- StarClan * Egretkit --- StarClan |
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Ember Pheonix
Characters : Hazelpaw(deceased), Ambernose(AN)(deceased)) ,Batpaw(mia)(BS), Jaysong(JS)(deceased), Jubilance(MIA), Lichenfang(LF), Cinderfrost( CF), Heathershade(HS)(deceased), Tawnypool(TP)(deceased),Frostpaw(FB) Clan/Rank : Ambernose SC warrior ||||||| Jaysong: TC senior warrior |||||| Lichenpaw TC apprentice ||||||||||||| Cinderpaw TC apprentice ||||||| Heatherpaw WC apprentice Number of posts : 1565
| Subject: Re: You'd Better be Better [Jaypaw's Assessment, closed for Amberpaw] Sun 15 Jan 2017 - 10:40 | |
| Jaypaw blinked the nodded she started to sniff the air quietly.
Ooc what is she doing hunting right? ______________________________________ Lichenfang(Elder)(tc) ||||Pantherclaw(young warrior)(tc)||||Amberpaw (apprentice)(sc)||| Sablekit(kit)(TC)|||| Frozenpaw(apprentice)(skc)||Snowpaw (apprentice)(tc) - Jaysong Of Thunderclan(Frost's biological mother) and Frost/frostkit to be of Thunderclan(Jaysong's only daughter) :
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Dimmeh
Characters : Blackwhisker and Midge, coming soon. Clan/Rank : "WCC's National Treasure" Number of posts : 2850 Age : 22
| Subject: Re: You'd Better be Better [Jaypaw's Assessment, closed for Amberpaw] Sun 15 Jan 2017 - 11:12 | |
| ooc;; yes. and you can hunt all in one post since it's quicker. ______________________________________ Blacktwig/Blackwhisker --- ThunderClan * Fallowstripe --- StarClan * Goatshade --- StarClan * Bouncepaw --- StarClan * Egretkit --- StarClan |
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Ember Pheonix
Characters : Hazelpaw(deceased), Ambernose(AN)(deceased)) ,Batpaw(mia)(BS), Jaysong(JS)(deceased), Jubilance(MIA), Lichenfang(LF), Cinderfrost( CF), Heathershade(HS)(deceased), Tawnypool(TP)(deceased),Frostpaw(FB) Clan/Rank : Ambernose SC warrior ||||||| Jaysong: TC senior warrior |||||| Lichenpaw TC apprentice ||||||||||||| Cinderpaw TC apprentice ||||||| Heatherpaw WC apprentice Number of posts : 1565
| Subject: Re: You'd Better be Better [Jaypaw's Assessment, closed for Amberpaw] Sun 15 Jan 2017 - 11:18 | |
| Alright
Jaypaw caught the scent of a mouse and followed it silent footed. She crouched down before she leapt though as she leapt she had made some noise and landed on where the mouse had been empty pawed she continued on to the next scent She caught.
She didn't know the scent she caught so she went to the next scent which was mouse again she crouched and pounced landing squarely on the mouse and killed it quickly. She smiled a little.
Just as Jaypaw buried the mouse to come back for later she heard movement above her head and saw the owl. She let her fur fluff up in surprise for a moment before she blinked in surprise as the owl flew down at her talons outstretched to strike her.
Owl used Talon Strike causing 10 damage. 50 hp ? Sp
Jaypaw: 10 HP 80 SP
Jaypaw growled and struck out at the owl before it managed to fly away.
Jaypaw used front paw strike dealing 4 damage using 10 Sp Jaypaw: 10/20 hp 70/80 Sp
Owl 46/50 hp ? Sp
Jaypaw saw the owl come back and with its talons outstretched it struck.
Ow used Talon Strike
Jaypaw winced unable to fight she backed off ______________________________________ Lichenfang(Elder)(tc) ||||Pantherclaw(young warrior)(tc)||||Amberpaw (apprentice)(sc)||| Sablekit(kit)(TC)|||| Frozenpaw(apprentice)(skc)||Snowpaw (apprentice)(tc) - Jaysong Of Thunderclan(Frost's biological mother) and Frost/frostkit to be of Thunderclan(Jaysong's only daughter) :
Last edited by Amberpaw on Mon 16 Jan 2017 - 15:50; edited 3 times in total |
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Mistpelt
Characters : Mistpelt Clan/Rank : RiverClanWarrior Number of posts : 15130 Age : 30
| Subject: Re: You'd Better be Better [Jaypaw's Assessment, closed for Amberpaw] Sun 15 Jan 2017 - 11:18 | |
| The member 'Amberpaw' has done the following action : Dices roll
#1 'Hunting Dice' : 3, 8
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#2 'Hunting Dice' : 1, 2
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#3 'Hunting Dice' : 9, 3______________________________________ ♪ ~Founder/Owner of WCC~♫ ~Forever a RiverClan Warrior~~Please pm Administrators with queries as I'm not active~ |
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Ember Pheonix
Characters : Hazelpaw(deceased), Ambernose(AN)(deceased)) ,Batpaw(mia)(BS), Jaysong(JS)(deceased), Jubilance(MIA), Lichenfang(LF), Cinderfrost( CF), Heathershade(HS)(deceased), Tawnypool(TP)(deceased),Frostpaw(FB) Clan/Rank : Ambernose SC warrior ||||||| Jaysong: TC senior warrior |||||| Lichenpaw TC apprentice ||||||||||||| Cinderpaw TC apprentice ||||||| Heatherpaw WC apprentice Number of posts : 1565
| Subject: Re: You'd Better be Better [Jaypaw's Assessment, closed for Amberpaw] Mon 16 Jan 2017 - 10:51 | |
| Ooc sorry for double posting but how do I do battle encounters just curious. ______________________________________ Lichenfang(Elder)(tc) ||||Pantherclaw(young warrior)(tc)||||Amberpaw (apprentice)(sc)||| Sablekit(kit)(TC)|||| Frozenpaw(apprentice)(skc)||Snowpaw (apprentice)(tc) - Jaysong Of Thunderclan(Frost's biological mother) and Frost/frostkit to be of Thunderclan(Jaysong's only daughter) :
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Dimmeh
Characters : Blackwhisker and Midge, coming soon. Clan/Rank : "WCC's National Treasure" Number of posts : 2850 Age : 22
| Subject: Re: You'd Better be Better [Jaypaw's Assessment, closed for Amberpaw] Mon 16 Jan 2017 - 14:48 | |
| ooc;; check pm, please don't spam this topic with oocs. ______________________________________ Blacktwig/Blackwhisker --- ThunderClan * Fallowstripe --- StarClan * Goatshade --- StarClan * Bouncepaw --- StarClan * Egretkit --- StarClan |
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Ember Pheonix
Characters : Hazelpaw(deceased), Ambernose(AN)(deceased)) ,Batpaw(mia)(BS), Jaysong(JS)(deceased), Jubilance(MIA), Lichenfang(LF), Cinderfrost( CF), Heathershade(HS)(deceased), Tawnypool(TP)(deceased),Frostpaw(FB) Clan/Rank : Ambernose SC warrior ||||||| Jaysong: TC senior warrior |||||| Lichenpaw TC apprentice ||||||||||||| Cinderpaw TC apprentice ||||||| Heatherpaw WC apprentice Number of posts : 1565
| Subject: Re: You'd Better be Better [Jaypaw's Assessment, closed for Amberpaw] Mon 16 Jan 2017 - 16:10 | |
| Ooc ok sorry
After the fight with the owl Jaypaw slowly shook out her fire and sat down for a brief moment to relax for a moment. She then decided to fry hunting again hoping she didn't run into another owl she scented the air for a moment and followed the scent of prey. She could see the squirrel and she flicked her tail before she leapt and leapt to far the squirrel saw her and scampered off quickly. She grew upset before she decided to fry again at least two more times. The next time she came across another squirrel and missedbwforeshe. Game to another mouse and yet again missed. She let her claws dig into the ground upset with herself"I suck at this"she mewed upset. ______________________________________ Lichenfang(Elder)(tc) ||||Pantherclaw(young warrior)(tc)||||Amberpaw (apprentice)(sc)||| Sablekit(kit)(TC)|||| Frozenpaw(apprentice)(skc)||Snowpaw (apprentice)(tc) - Jaysong Of Thunderclan(Frost's biological mother) and Frost/frostkit to be of Thunderclan(Jaysong's only daughter) :
Last edited by Amberpaw on Mon 16 Jan 2017 - 16:14; edited 1 time in total |
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Mistpelt
Characters : Mistpelt Clan/Rank : RiverClanWarrior Number of posts : 15130 Age : 30
| Subject: Re: You'd Better be Better [Jaypaw's Assessment, closed for Amberpaw] Mon 16 Jan 2017 - 16:10 | |
| The member 'Amberpaw' has done the following action : Dices roll
#1 'Hunting Dice' : 9, 7
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#2 'Hunting Dice' : 10, 8
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#3 'Hunting Dice' : 2, 4______________________________________ ♪ ~Founder/Owner of WCC~♫ ~Forever a RiverClan Warrior~~Please pm Administrators with queries as I'm not active~ |
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Dimmeh
Characters : Blackwhisker and Midge, coming soon. Clan/Rank : "WCC's National Treasure" Number of posts : 2850 Age : 22
| Subject: Re: You'd Better be Better [Jaypaw's Assessment, closed for Amberpaw] Mon 16 Jan 2017 - 16:18 | |
| Mottledwing studied her apprentice's motions. She had chased the owl off, yet missed two catches by the tail of a mouse. Lo, disappointed, the pale blue she-cat sat with her head hung. Not giving away her position, Mottledwing slithered, and the red-and-white molly, as much as she wanted to encourage the slender apprentice, kept herself latent. She patiently blinked her beautiful hazel eyes, sure that Jaypaw would succeed. ______________________________________ Blacktwig/Blackwhisker --- ThunderClan * Fallowstripe --- StarClan * Goatshade --- StarClan * Bouncepaw --- StarClan * Egretkit --- StarClan |
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Ember Pheonix
Characters : Hazelpaw(deceased), Ambernose(AN)(deceased)) ,Batpaw(mia)(BS), Jaysong(JS)(deceased), Jubilance(MIA), Lichenfang(LF), Cinderfrost( CF), Heathershade(HS)(deceased), Tawnypool(TP)(deceased),Frostpaw(FB) Clan/Rank : Ambernose SC warrior ||||||| Jaysong: TC senior warrior |||||| Lichenpaw TC apprentice ||||||||||||| Cinderpaw TC apprentice ||||||| Heatherpaw WC apprentice Number of posts : 1565
| Subject: Re: You'd Better be Better [Jaypaw's Assessment, closed for Amberpaw] Mon 16 Jan 2017 - 16:30 | |
| Jaypaw really wanted to succed so pushing down her disappointment with herself she sniffed the air for prey and followed the scent. Again she heard the sound of the owl and saw it coming. She couldn't fight the bird again and she went for cover until it passed waiting. Once it passed she sniffed the air and followed the next scent
She caught the scent of a squirrel and went after it. Though she missed and she grew upset but took in a quiet breathe and let it out before she caught another scent and followed it. She caught the scent of a mouse and she crouched down and pounced sailing through the air she landed on the price of prey and killed it. Some of her confidence returned and she looked around sniffing the air she only needs to catch one more price of prey.
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Last edited by Amberpaw on Mon 16 Jan 2017 - 16:36; edited 3 times in total |
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Mistpelt
Characters : Mistpelt Clan/Rank : RiverClanWarrior Number of posts : 15130 Age : 30
| Subject: Re: You'd Better be Better [Jaypaw's Assessment, closed for Amberpaw] Mon 16 Jan 2017 - 16:30 | |
| The member 'Amberpaw' has done the following action : Dices roll
#1 'Hunting Dice' : 1, 1
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#2 'Hunting Dice' : 8, 10
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#3 'Hunting Dice' : 4, 3______________________________________ ♪ ~Founder/Owner of WCC~♫ ~Forever a RiverClan Warrior~~Please pm Administrators with queries as I'm not active~ |
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Dimmeh
Characters : Blackwhisker and Midge, coming soon. Clan/Rank : "WCC's National Treasure" Number of posts : 2850 Age : 22
| Subject: Re: You'd Better be Better [Jaypaw's Assessment, closed for Amberpaw] Mon 16 Jan 2017 - 16:52 | |
| Mottledwing purred with approval, continuing to watch young Jaypaw. ______________________________________ Blacktwig/Blackwhisker --- ThunderClan * Fallowstripe --- StarClan * Goatshade --- StarClan * Bouncepaw --- StarClan * Egretkit --- StarClan |
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