Duskkits Request

Cat Name:Duskkit/paw/

Clan:Thuderclan

What are the duties of a medicine cat:To help my clan mates if needed, if hurt, or sick. Also to share tungs with starclan

What you would do with this position:I would help my clan the best i could by healing and helping in other problems my clanmates

Why you think you deserve this position:I belive i should because i want to help my clanmates the best i possible can. also thunderclan doesn't have one

Recommendations: i don't think i have any



thank you if you approve and have a nice day

I don't approve, based on the form. I would recommend to get better grammar. I can't really understand the form. Also, if you don't really know why you want to be a medicine cat, then maybe let someone else have it.

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I don't reccommend. I don't exactly trust new members with position as this. I also agree that you need to work on your grammar bit DX

i was having a little concintrasion troubles and i thought abou it and i should have waited to post it

and sorry if i spell any thing wrong

There's an edit button in the top right corner of your posts right next to the quote button x3 If you have anything to add and no one has posted after you, just use that button. Alright?

In the future, just edit your post too.
EDIT: Oops... Like Sleepy said.

oh i didn't know that i'm sorry thanks Sleepy and I'm still in gratituded and i have edited it be back in about 30 minutes

i'm back

Again, edit button ; A;

Telling someone to work on their grammar makes no sense. It is vague and not very helpful. D:<

Here is a grammatically accurate version of your initial post:

Quote :

Cat Name: Dustkit/paw/

Clan: Thuderclan

What are the duties of a medicine cat: To help my clan mates when it is needed, or if they are hurt or sick. Communicating with StarClan is a big part of the position as well.

What you would do with this position: I would help my clan the best way I know how; to heal, help and support my Clanmates.

Why you think you deserve this position: I wish to become Medicine Cat of ThunderClan because I want to help my Clanmates to the fullest extent of my ability.

Recommendations: N/a

I wouldn't recommend such an important role when you're just beginning as a roleplayer, Dust. Not that you couldn't do it, but it is a difficult position to start out with. You'll learn good spelling and grammar as you go along . . . My advice: Read. A lot. Especially fiction, like Warriors. It can turn you from a basic speller to a superb one. Pay attention in class, of course, and put what you post through a spell check if needed. (there are plenty available) Don't expect to write like a pro in a day, especially at your age.

I would say you should go through the ranks and become a Warrior, if you're interested. Warriors are extremely important, but there are others and you can practice your writing skills with them. If you really want the Medicine Cat position, wait until a little later. If you stick around by the time an admin thinks you can handle it, I'm sure you'll do a great job.

Whatever you decide to do, good luck! And don't be afraid to ask for help. Writing can be hard, especially if you've never done a roleplaying site like this before. But you can do it. Don't give up, and keep practicing! :)

thanks Moo-ry Christmas i'll really nice advice i think i'm gonna keep this up but keep getting better and i will just have to get better oh and i am new at the roleplaying type of site

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thanks Moo-ry Christmas i'll really nice advice i think i'm gonna keep this up but keep getting better and i will just have to get better oh and i am new at the roleplaying type of site

I hope you stay! This site is actually very fun and our members are great. You'll fit right in, give it time! And call me Moon. xD That's what I'm known as here for the most part.

If you want to get to know us you can always visit the chatbox at the bottom of the forum; there is nearly always someone there. xD If you need help, remember to contact the administrators or moderators. Jay, Sleepy, and Rain are our admins, and the mods include Ebony and Shadow.

I know you'll make a great roleplayer some day, just work on your grammatical execution. You'll be fine! :D

thanks again MOON i've met Sleepy and thunderclan's leader to i think this site is cool my freinds sister made a site like this but you can make your own clan and sorry Kestral I took them off

I know this is out of topic, but your fourth banner on the top is really inappropriate, and shouldn't be displayed on this type of site. ;_;