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| Frostkit's Creation | |
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~KittenPrincess~
Number of posts : 3 Age : 24
| Subject: Frostkit's Creation Thu 4 Oct 2012 - 11:11 | |
| Cat Name: Frostkit
Tom Or She-Cat: She-Cat
Favorite Warriors Characters: Dovewing, Leafpool and Jayfeather
Familiarity With The Series: I'm on Omen Of The Stars #3, Night Whispers
Appearance: very small, bright blue eyes, pure white and has silvery markings around ankles (giving an illusion of being chained).
Personality: very shy and self-conscious, though very fun around closest friends.Doesn't mind being in water.Can be brave, but will usually stiffen in fear when scenting fresh fox, badger, or enemy clan. Can be quite deadly in battle with extremely sharp and unusually long claws. Does best attacking at full speed when the enemy is unable to sense her. Fights like stalking prey, without the killing bite. Will do anything to prove she is as loyal as any cat.
Clan: WindClan (hopefully)
Origins: daughter of rouge cats, mother died in kitting, sister born dead, father hates her for killing his mate and disowns her.
Frostkit stared out the entrance to the nursery. As soon as she saw black-furred legs, she pounced. The cat she had pounced on stumbled. Yes! she thought. The cat shook her off and continued to the fresh-kill pile. Frostkit bounded back to the nursery. She was exhausted. She snuggled into her nest. I'm going to be the best hunter ever! Frostkit thought as she drifted into sleep.
Last edited by Riversong on Fri 2 Nov 2012 - 19:55; edited 3 times in total |
| | | Stormi the Gummy
Clan/Rank : {Storm}Riverclan/Experienced Warrior {Adder}Thunderclan/Experienced Warrior {Red}Shadowclan/Experienced Warrior {Wolf}Shadowclan/Apprentice Number of posts : 3741 Age : 25
| Subject: Re: Frostkit's Creation Thu 4 Oct 2012 - 15:33 | |
| Hello and welcome to WCC! I'd like to help you with your creation~
River, Sun, Star(With the exception of leaders), Moon, Wind, Sky, Shadow, and Thunder are are considered sacred named and are not allowed to be used.
Also, cats should be realistic. Perhaps instead of violet eyes, she could have blue eyes? Blue eyes are common with white cats :3 Another thin would be the scar. Scars aren't silver, for one thing, and since we start out as kits, you'd have to wait to get that scar. She can't just be born with it.
Most of the time, a cat is named after its appearance when born. After that, when he/she becomes a warrior, they are named after a certain skill or their personality, or perhaps if there isn't much anything special about them, after their appearance again. Rarely are cats named after a special deed, but some members like to have their cat kit/apprentice name, then when they are a warrior, think up a warrior name then. That way it's easier to think of things he/she has done. But those are recommendations. You don't have to use Snowkit, and you don't have to wait to think of a name ^ ^ Just trying to help a bit.
One last thing: You forgot to do your role playing sample. This will just show us how you role play, so you don't end up messing up in topics x3 ______________________________________ |
| | | ~KittenPrincess~
Number of posts : 3 Age : 24
| Subject: revision of Riverkit Sun 7 Oct 2012 - 10:04 | |
| Cat Name: Frostkit
Tom Or She-Cat: She-Cat
Favorite Warriors Characters: Dovewing, Leafpool and Jayfeather
Familiarity With The Series: I'm on Omen Of The Stars #3, Night Whispers
Appearance: very small, bright blue eyes, pure white and has silvery markings around ankles (giving an illusion of being chained).
Personality: very shy and self-conscious, though very fun around closest friends.Doesn't mind being in water.Can be brave, but will usually stiffen in fear when scenting fresh fox, badger, or enemy clan. Can be quite deadly in battle with extremely sharp and unusually long claws. Does best attacking at full speed when the enemy is unable to sense her. Fights like stalking prey, without the killing bite. Will do anything to prove she is as loyal as any cat.
Clan: WindClan (hopefully)
Origins: daughter of rouge cats, mother died in kitting, sister born dead, father hates her for killing his mate and disowns her.
Frostkit stared out the entrance to the nursery. As soon as she saw black-furred legs, she pounced. The cat she had pounced on stumbled. Yes! she thought. The cat shook her off and continued to the fresh-kill pile. Frostkit bounded back to the nursery. She was exhausted. She snuggled into her nest. I'm going to be the best hunter ever! Frostkit thought as she drifted into sleep. |
| | | Splotch
Characters : Sleepycloud, Hopepaw, Lakepaw, Bear Clan/Rank : Ye Old Member-- ALL THUNDERCLAN OOPS Sleepycloud (MCA), Hopepaw [App], Lake [App], Bear [Loner[ Number of posts : 3610 Gender : She/her Age : 24
| Subject: Re: Frostkit's Creation Sun 7 Oct 2012 - 10:58 | |
| :D You are here! *glomps* Did you send secret word to an admin yet? Also there is an edit button. X3 I have made the same mistake before, when I joined. *sigh* Memories. ______________________________________ ✲Sleepycloud✲ || ✲Hopepaw✲ || ✲Lakekit✲ |
| | | Rainy
Characters : Heatherpaw Number of posts : 5137 Age : 27
| Subject: Re: Frostkit's Creation Fri 9 Nov 2012 - 16:05 | |
| All I need is the Secret Word! You can find it by reading the rules. :3 |
| | | Rainy
Characters : Heatherpaw Number of posts : 5137 Age : 27
| Subject: Re: Frostkit's Creation Sat 24 Nov 2012 - 17:12 | |
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