Destiny feedback.

Alright, so like I said, here's the place to put what you thought about Destiny, like any questions or comments. I would really like if you gave me some help, anything you think I could improve on, ect. Anything is appreciated. c:

lolnoago~

EDIT: I added a poll. ( :youdon\'tsaypl )

After finally getting around to reading it, its a very good story! I like what you're doing with it right now with the whole 'what kind of world do they live in?' Deal. Like.. there are several holes/questions that still need to be filled/answered. It definitely keeps the reader interested even if there are a few grammatical and spelling errors such as 'took' not 'toke'. Otherwise its a well-thought-out story so far! I shall keep reading :D

:stopitplz:

x3 Thank you! I'm trying to use good grammar and make as little mistakes as possible, but it happens anyway. xD And I'm also trying to have it be suspenseful and make it where the questions/holes get answered/filled one at a time. cx