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Blackwatch
Clan/Rank : Thunderclan Kit
 
Number of posts : 7
Age : 26
| | Subject: Brownkits creation Sat 25 Feb 2012 - 16:03 | |
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Name: Brownkit
sex:Tom
favorite characters:Firestar and Brambleclaw
familiarity:Series 1-2 as well as reading a little of the first book of 3
Appearance:Dark brown fur with some specks of lighter fur around the body and piercing blue eyes.
Was born a normal clan cat with average size for his age.
I want to play as a calm, dignified, and noble cat.
Last edited by Blackwatch on Sun 26 Feb 2012 - 6:53; edited 1 time in total |
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May
Characters : Maypaw & Silvershade most notably
Clan/Rank : RiverClan vet
 
Number of posts : 2194
Age : 22
| | Subject: Re: Brownkits creation Sat 25 Feb 2012 - 16:25 | |
| Okay, here's a few tips. Where's your RP sample?
By the way, keep the things that tell you what to put, it lets us know what's there. Origins is your ancestry. |
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Blackwatch
Clan/Rank : Thunderclan Kit
Number of posts : 7
Age : 26
| | Subject: Re: Brownkits creation Sun 26 Feb 2012 - 6:57 | |
| Origins: Full Thunderclan
RP sample: Brownkit watched as the other kits mewed and fought over the biggest piece of prey. Smiling he calmly took an average sized mouse and bit into it.
Last edited by Blackwatch on Sun 26 Feb 2012 - 9:56; edited 1 time in total |
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Mossy
 
Number of posts : 5271
Age : 23
| | Subject: Re: Brownkits creation Sun 26 Feb 2012 - 8:15 | |
| Good, but can you add a few sentenes?
Fighted should be fought, by the way. ______________________________________ |
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Blackwatch
Clan/Rank : Thunderclan Kit
Number of posts : 7
Age : 26
| | Subject: Re: Brownkits creation Sun 26 Feb 2012 - 9:38 | |
| Okay sorry i'll edit it.
More RP: Brownkit was standing silently in the corner with his mother and father while watching the other kits play. "Its not healthy for a kit to be watching instead of playing" his mother purred. "But fighting isn't always a good thing right?", the young kit said. Don't cats die when they fight?" |
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Blackwatch
Clan/Rank : Thunderclan Kit
Number of posts : 7
Age : 26
| | Subject: Re: Brownkits creation Sun 26 Feb 2012 - 15:30 | |
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Mossy
Number of posts : 5271
Age : 23
| | Subject: Re: Brownkits creation Sun 26 Feb 2012 - 16:17 | |
| Ahh, please don't do that. You have to wait for people to post. ______________________________________ |
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Blackwatch
Clan/Rank : Thunderclan Kit
Number of posts : 7
Age : 26
| | Subject: Re: Brownkits creation Wed 29 Feb 2012 - 12:22 | |
| Sorry I meant no disrespect. |
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Rainy
Characters : Heatherpaw
 
Number of posts : 5137
Age : 27
| | Subject: Re: Brownkits creation Wed 29 Feb 2012 - 16:06 | |
| Have you read the rules? That's always a good place to start. (:
If you PM me the secret word, I can approve you and you can start RPing! |
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Blackwatch
Clan/Rank : Thunderclan Kit
Number of posts : 7
Age : 26
| | Subject: Re: Brownkits creation Sat 3 Mar 2012 - 5:55 | |
| Two questions
1. How do I PM someone?
2. What's the secret word? |
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meme police
Characters : Antkit, Dipperkit
Clan/Rank : ThunderClan/kit, ShadowClan/kit
Number of posts : 1976
Age : 22
| | Subject: Re: Brownkits creation Sat 3 Mar 2012 - 6:10 | |
| 1-Click on whoever you want to PM's user name, click 'Contact' Once your on their profile, and one of the links should say 'Pm' or 'PM' or 'Private Message'. It will then bring you to a screen where you type your message. Once your done typing your message, click send.
2-None of us can tell you that. It's your job to find it. It's located somewhere in the rules. ______________________________________  Art credit to Grey. |
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Jay
Number of posts : 9353
Age : 26
| | Subject: Re: Brownkits creation Sat 3 Mar 2012 - 9:17 | |
| The Secret Word is located in small print in the "The Basics" topic in the Rules. After you find it, just PM it to me or Rain here, and you'll be good to go! :)
Also, it would be nice to read over those rules while you are looking for it. XD ______________________________________ i used to administrate but the man tore me down
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Jay
Number of posts : 9353
Age : 26
| | Subject: Re: Brownkits creation Sun 18 Mar 2012 - 13:31 | |
| Sorry for the double post, be he has PMd me.
Approved! ______________________________________ i used to administrate but the man tore me down
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