Ashkit's creation

Cat Name: Ashkit

Tom or She-Cat: She-Cat

Favorite Warriors Character(s): Firestar, Graystripe, Sandstorm, Cloudtail

Familiarity with the series: All Books

Appearance:Gray, Black, and White Spotted Calico

Personality: Outgoing, funny, and smart

Origins:Thunderclan

RP Sample (A short paragraph of how you would RP): Ashkit, and Splotchkit plodded around the pact walls of the nursery."This is boring."Complained Splotchkit."I know right? What else could we do?" Asked Ashkit."we should really get out of here! Squealed Splotchkit excitedly. "Isn't that kind of dangerous? You know, with badgers and stuff like that?" Ashkit questioned. "Well if you don't want to go, I can go by myself." Splotchkit shot back defiantly. "Fine, I'll go." Ashkit meowed cooly. "So, following the warriors' smooth, swift steps, they made their way unseen across the camp, below and out the bramble barrier, and in to the forest.

Okay, it's very good, but I'm going to explain a few things about role-playing to you.

I realize it was for the purpose of your creation, but we do not RP other characters. We don't control/say what they feel, what they say, do, how they react, etc.
Also, there are a few things you could fix with proper capitalization and punctuation.

Calicos have orange in their spots~

Other than that, PM me the secret word, and I'll approve you!